| "Betrayal?" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Nichole On: September 12, 2004 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhhhh. That's so sweet! The ending was soooooooooooo sweet i almost cried( And i NEVER cry) But your fic was awsome keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Nichole On: September 12, 2004 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhhhh. That's so sweet! The ending was soooooooooooo sweet i almost cried( And i NEVER cry) But your fic was awsome keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: PJ On: August 28, 2004 02:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was pretty cool I liked it. I just got done watching the third movie (downloaded it) and there is a scene where Sessy pushes Inu out of the way of an attack..... Sessy says "Your in the way" but it sure did look like he was protecting Inuyasha. There are a few more scenes where it looks like one or the other is helping/protecting the other *if you look closely* Cool story too bad it is a one shot you could add to it that much later Inuyasha beats him and won't kill him and says he still thinks of him as a brother, etc
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