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| "Cell, Your Personal Guide To Meet Characters." Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Zakoryu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 12:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanks for reviewing me people.
| Title: Hello?
Reviewed By: Sakura!!!!! On: October 24, 2004 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
R U gonna update or just make us wait. Rune:*places wrists together*KA-ME-HA-ME-HAAAAAA! Misaru:DUCK FOR COVER!!!!!!!
| Title: I want to meet Kaiba!
Reviewed By: Sakura!!!!!! On: September 24, 2004 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In short your story....ROCKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I agree with yukukurama, Shitaru is an idiot. Anyway next time Kaiba is in there can you put me in? Also, Shitaru, if your listening... THIS IS A FIC SITE AND PEOPLE ARE ALLOWED TO CHANGE PEOPLE A LITTLE!!!! I MEAN LOOK AT ALL THE PEOPLE WHO SAY KAIBA IS IN LOVE WITH SERENITY!!!(
| Title: I want to meet Kaiba!
Reviewed By: Sakura!!!!!! On: September 24, 2004 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In short your story....ROCKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I agree with yukukurama, Shitaru is an idiot. Anyway next time Kaiba is in there can you put me in? Also, Shitaru, if your listening... THIS IS A FIC SITE AND PEOPLE ARE ALLOWED TO CHANGE PEOPLE A LITTLE!!!! I MEAN LOOK AT ALL THE PEOPLE WHO SAY KAIBA IS IN LOVE WITH SERENITY!!!(
| Title: hey
Reviewed By: yokukarama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 18:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
listen to this guy shitaru i mean he looks at every single detail and tells you to correct it what the hell just because his story is crap doesnt mean he has to make yours sound bad this guy really thinks hes all that cause he corrected you but hes not imean listen to this "you need to put more exclamations". shut the hellup well i just had to defend you on that well... see ya
| Reviewed By: Shitaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
...By the gods...this was short...Too short...Ahem, well, Since you reviewed me, I'll review one of yours...I notice that this is YOUR first Review as well... Alright. First off...Where to start...Oh! Okay, First, You should take it from the comedy section...It should be more or less put in...the um...Urr...What section does it fit in? Anyway, while I'm sure that some of the original Manga fans know that she sounded her name out(which, She also did in the show when he kept calling her "You!" and "Hey!" and "Kikyou")I doubt she would do that for all people who ask her name...Second of all, I've never really seen Inuyasha worried. He only gets angry when Naraku appears. Not only that, But you should really look into Exclamation marks and Question marks. Those would help the expressions. Quoted, "Cell: "What the hell. Are you an idiot or something. Red Rover is for babies." would look better as Cell: "What the hell!? Are you an idiot or something!? Red Rover is for babies!" I mean come on, You use an exclamation mark after that line, but not in the one before it. Why? Are they special? And...The word 'Hear'.."could here him."..is spelled, 'hear'. The here you have is wrong. Either you've never heard of a spell or grammar check or something... And, in the next chapter, there is an abundance of exclamation marks.Again, why couldn't you use those before? I guess, What I'm trying to say is...You need some practice. And who are you to criticize my group?
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