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| "Finding who you really are" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Title: Person
Reviewed By: issy71091 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good i am really enjoying how this book is coming along and it's really interseting and you do have a very creativity and plus will people who worte reviews to you be in your book just wondering. :^)Issy Bye
| Title: There's going to be a new Chapter soon.
Reviewed By: Queen of Cuteys [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 03:10 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm starting a new chapter and I should have it posted up soon to all of you who might want to read more. Just to let you know, my spelling and typos are way better from my last program, and I hope you don't have any dificaulty this time plus I have decited to introduce the Sailor Roses in this chapter. I hope you all will enjoy it and review. Memember I do not mind flams. Just give me your oppion on the story. And I would also like to reciondnise Issy for reviewing. I hope you will enjoy the next Chapter. Remember have Fun. * Queen of Cuteys *
| Title: There's going to be a new Chapter soon.
Reviewed By: Queen of Cuteys [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 03:09 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm starting a new chapter and I should have it posted up soon to all of you who might want to read more. Just to let you know, my spelling and typos are way better from my last program, and I hope you don't have any dificaulty this time plus I have decited to introduce the Sailor Roses in this chapter. I hope you all will enjoy it and review. Memember I do not mind flams. Just give me your oppion on the story. And I would also like to reciondnise Issy for reviewing. I hope you will enjoy the next Chapter. Remember have Fun. * Queen of Cuteys *
| Reviewed By: Issy Witt On: November 16, 2004 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello and your story is very instersting and i think it's really good right now just keep the language down and send this story to my friend she would really like it and plus very imargery and fun to read keep writing you might have a real talent in wirting!!!Issy
| Title: I'd like to Thank...
Reviewed By: Queen of Cuteys [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 15:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'd like to thank Ja'ne -Ruka for the review. Yes I have been out of Sailor Moon for a cupple of years and yes my spelling does suck beond all reason. I would like to thank Ja'ne -Ruka for giving me some information I didn't know before and will corect my mistakes. I would also like to say that yes I do know that Helios's life long job is to protect the Golden Crystal. He is at the place of Elysion were Terra travled to start her training. I'm also sorry for not writing more to my Fanfic to give more people my idea about how things are going to work but I've been tangled up in a lot of homework and haven't had a chance to write more. Please bare with me it's my first attempt at writing a Fanfic. I would like to let people know that I do not mind any criticism, and if you have any coments to just please write reviews or e-mail me. Thank You.
| Reviewed By: citrus On: October 06, 2004 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
This piece of fiction was poorly written. I have read only little but your lack of knowledge of Bishoujo Senshi Sailormoon and proper grammar, you have left me stunned. First, it's Uranus, it's also a planet, maybe you've read about it in school? When you said 'Ten'ou, Kaiou, Ceres, Pallas, and Ves [it's actually Vesta if you are refering them as the Sailor Quartet] and you are. You wouldn't say Tenoh and Kaioh because you *already* mentioned Neptune/Uranus, they're the same person you know. I have a few suggestions. ONE! Spell check is your friend, it wont harm you, only make you better. TWO! It's the Starlights or Kinmokusei Senshi. Not Sailor Stars. Ok, I'm confused, how could Helios go to help Terra train? His mission/life's living is to protect the Golden Crystal in the heart of the Earth. Because by the way you say this, it's in about the 'S' season. Learn capitalization. It makes a difference, believe me. Best wishes with your story. I'm sure wit the proper editing your story will improve greatly and do much better. Ja'ne -Ruka
| Title: Keep reading
Reviewed By: Queen of Cuteys [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 16:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi there people! It's me Queen of Cuteys. I'm sorry for the longe drage on ablout her leaving, but I still have alot of kinks to work out, Keep cheking to see If I write, I'm already working on chap. 3 and can some of you give advise? I'm actually staring to run out of a plot. =( This is also my first attempt at writing a fanfic of my own. I really need some help of how to make Inuyasha enter the fanfic, I have a few ideas after they meet, but I can't get him into the fanfic ( no ideas ya know ) I hope that more of you start writing reviews, and I prommis that it'll go alot faster after Terra gets on Earth. THanks for your time. Keep reading! * Qeuun of Cuteys *
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