Title: =^-^= Reviewed By: Neko Kurama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 19:39 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: You're notes at the beginning and end is something I usually just skip over (that's what the "6" is for) They only give readers a bad first impression which you do not deserve. I really liked this story, it wasn't bad and you shouldn't have such a negative take on yourself and your writing (not depressing writing but saying it's bad). I really liked this story and I can see it being a larger if you decide to make more, which may not be a bad idea. Your fanart is pretty good as well. I know it's an odd place to comment on it, but this is the first review I've given you. I will be sure to look further into your stories. ~Six
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