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| "Spira's Tournement" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] | Title: Heh...
Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 12:53 CST
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Nice chapter. And I'm glad that you're still continuing with this story. ^_^ It was a bit of shocker to find out that they were sisters but even more shocking to know that Seymour fathered them, and then left them at Marik's mercy! Pfft...some father he is. In any case, can't wait for the next chapter. Till next time...
| Title: FINALLY!
Reviewed By: Gallantmon of the Hazard [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 06:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad to see that you haven't given up on this story and I'm glad! I really like this story! Anyway, I hope that I will see the next chapter sooner than this one, but this one was good! Anyway, interest fusion of Dark Magician Girl and Fire Princess! I like it! Ixion and Double Spell combo with Rikku using it. . . Awesome! Anyway, I've got to say that those Al Bhed girls didn't sound like that they were lying about the truth of what happened with them, did they? With Semyour as their adoptive father, yipe! No wonder that they hated the world! Semyour just added fuel to their 'fire'! Anyway, can't wait to what happens next and to see Seymour, Yami Marik, and Yami Bakura to come out and play. Later and best wishes!
| Title: Uhhh....
Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 00:41 CDT
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Uhhh, are you still working on this story? I'm still waiting for your update. T_T
| Reviewed By: devildice708(didn't feel like logging in) On: June 09, 2005 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's no rush man. This story is getting better and better by the chapters. Can't wait for the next update!
| Title: Whoa!
Reviewed By: Gallantmon of the Hazard [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 07:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, talk about shocking surprises! The sisters have the Magus Sisters Aeon Cards! I got to admit, nice touch! Hey, the final Magus Sister Aeon Card is like the Winged Dragon of Ra with the ATK/DEF are dependent on the combined ATK/DEF of the sarcifices made to summon the monster. Personally, nice touch. And now, whoa! What do those sisters think that they know about Yuna and her family that she doesn't?! Can't wait for the answer! Keep up the good work!
| Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: Gallantmon of the Hazard [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 06:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep! It is me, again! So, this story will be a three-parter, huh? Well, I can't take for Part 2 and Part 3! Anyway, by the preview of the second part, it looks like things are going to take a turn for the worst and they are going to have a Shadow Game with the sisters using the Eye of Horus! I can't wait for action, drama, and angst of Part 2 of this three-on-three duel! And one more thing, the way that you set up this three-on-three duel, GREAT! Keep up the good work! Later!
| Title: Good job
Reviewed By: Gallantmon of the Hazard [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 06:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! Another good chapter in as usual! However, from your preview, it looks like those three sisters are not exactly evil, they are just angry and bitter at all of Spira for some reason and it looks like it is connected with the Summoners, like Lord Braska, or could it be Yevon? The three sisters are true Al Bhed correct? Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter and I can't wait for more! Keep it up! Later! And thanks for the use of your Aeon cards in my story!
| Title: Minor Favor
Reviewed By: Gallantmon of the Hazard [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 13:51 CDT
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Hey, it is me, again. I want to ask you something: Can I use your idea of Aeon cards in my story of Digimon Worlds: Dimensional Endgame? My story is a crossover story of multiple worlds including Yu-Gi-Oh and Final Fantasy X/X-2 and your Aeons cards in this story gave me an idea for my story. However, my story with the Aeon cards will be different from yours. But I wanted to ask your permission first and plus, I will give you credit my story, of course, since this is your idea. So, what do you say? And please, reply as soon as you can. By the way, this story is getting exciting! Keep up the good work!
| Title: Another good chapter!
Reviewed By: Gallantmon of the Hazard [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 07:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say for this chapter: Talk about your pains of the heart! Personally, I think that Aria's little trick with that 'emotion/mind control ring' and using Joey's feelings to attack his own is lower than low. Aria says that she is so pure and then bam, she and her family is revealed to be lower than low! Personally, I hope that this works out for the best! One question: With Yu-Gi-Oh romances, do you like Seto/Serenity romances? Well, keep up the good work! And please don't bash any of the characters, too much, okay? See you soon!
| Title: Great job and My bad!
Reviewed By: Gallantmon of the Hazard [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 07:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, it's me, once more! I just checked my own card and you were right all along! Totally, my bad! Sorry about mixing you up like that! Forgive? Anyway, great job on that chapter! Using two Aeon cards at once. . . Nice! Anyway, sorry to be a pain, but I've got two questions. Why did you call the Bahamut Aeon card, the 'Light of Bahamut'? I don't mean to be insulting and it is your story, but I thought that Bamamut used Dark elemental magic in Final Fantasy X and X-2. Well, anyway, I loved the two combo monsters, anyway. One final question are you going to make Kaiba combine one of his traps with the 'Light of Bahamut' and then with one of his monsters like 'Waking the Dragons' Blue Eyes Tyrant Dragon? Personally, I would LOVE to see that! Anyway, keep up the good work!
| Title: Gallantmon
Reviewed By: Gallantmon of the Hazard [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, it's me, Gallantmon of the Hazard, the Digimon fan that's also a fan of your story! I'm glad that you updated your fanfiction so soon! Great work, this chapter is quite, including the double duel with Yugi and Kaiba going aganist Logos and Ormi. However, I've got to tell, sorry if I sound insulting and all, but about Obnoxious Celtic Guardian, I've got the English verison of the card and it says 'Obnoxious Celtic Guardian' on the title, not 'Obnoxious Celtic Guard' like you said. Sorry if I insulted you for pointing out that mistake, but I've got to tell you that. Anyway, keep up the good work! Later!
| Title: Finally!
Reviewed By: Gallantmon of the Hazard [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 10:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, the name is Gallantmon of the Hazard, I'm a Digimon fan, but I like Final Fantasy, especially Final Fantasy X and X-2, and Yu-Gi-Oh! I loved you story, 'A New Path', the prelude to this story! Now, I'm finally glad that you did this chapter! I've been waiting forever! Please update as soon as possible! By the way, there are eight aeons, Valefor, Ifirt, Ixion, Shiva, Bamahut, Anima, Yojiabo, and the three Magus Sisters. So far, Yuna and Yugi, currently fused with Yami, have received two of them. Is Kaiba going to get one? And has Pegasus made Aeon Cards of all the aeons? Hope to see more as soon as possible! Later!
| Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Altea On: May 07, 2005 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv it!! This story is so cool! Please update soon.
| Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was real fun to read. Update soon?
| Reviewed By: bee bee On: February 28, 2005 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me like it update soon and umm is gippal going to be in the story and whats the pairing?
| Reviewed By: Darkrose 17 On: January 30, 2005 16:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Please continue. When is Yuna going to see Tidus again? When is the YGO gang going to see Noah again because I want to see sparks fly.
| Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model On: January 11, 2005 19:29 CST
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>O Rage for blaming my Malik-kun. XD You update fast! And 40 chapters!? [faints]
| Reviewed By: Uber Rei (too lazy too sign in) On: January 09, 2005 14:27 CST
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;3; I totally forgot about Mediaminer....XD UPDATE SOON! I thought you had forgotten all about this fic...:D More spira plz~! [holds breath for Lenne and Shuyin]
| Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 20:45 CDT
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[Punches Kaiba] ARSEHOLE! ;_; I hope Malik plays a much more active role in this fic. XD Rikku-chan, as energetic as ever! Woo!
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