| "Longing" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: much better
Reviewed By: babmidnight wolfsbabe On: October 24, 2004 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is much better than taking other people's work. Writting can show who you are. You can be a good writter and when it comes to putting it in a story it can come out alot different. I was nice to see something that was yours and not someone elses. It's a good start. but that does not mean you have to stop where you did. Maybe use it for another one shot or something. You could take a plot from there. I don't see many fics with his childhood.
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Reviewed By: penguin234 On: October 19, 2004 21:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
one of the cutest fics about inu (as a child) that I ever read
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Reviewed By: Kenzi On: October 19, 2004 19:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG!!! THATS OOOO CUTE!!!!! !POOR YASHA!!!! I SHOULKD BEAT THAT VILLAGES ASS!!! EVIL LITTLE VILLAGE!! POOR YASHA!! CONTINUE!!!!!
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