| "Broken" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: kato-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 15:28 CST
Comment/Review:
I want more!!! This was so sweet and angsty. I love your BradxSchu!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, thank you for the powerful flashback! Poor Schuldig. Wonderful job with the shifting POVs. Boo, hiss Limbus, the more we learn of this new organization, the less I like it. I hope both redheads can find their way back to their old teams. Please come back soon with more.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I thought the way you handled the kiss was wonderful. Now for some explanations, please?! Where exactly have Schuldig and Ran been, how complicated are matters, and will they ever be able to be back with together with those for whom they truly care? I greatly look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: kato_c On: December 10, 2004 11:46 CST
Comment/Review:
You have officially hooked me on this fic. I will be following it to its end. I love a sweet BradxSchu fic. There aren't enough out there. And Schu angst paired with Brad comfort is my favorite combination :) Hope the next part is out soon.
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Title: Broken
Reviewed By: HeatherR On: December 01, 2004 15:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow. I have to admit that I've been reading this on the sly for a while now. Its really different and I like what you've written so far. I'm very inrigued. Especially about Ran since you've only had that one little bit about Weiss. This chapter was the best so far. Or at least I think so. It was nice to see Brad take the stick out of his ass for once and be sweet. And I loved Ken's reaction to Ran's voice on the answering machine. Please keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more! HeatherR
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Reviewed By: CC On: December 01, 2004 10:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Gah! I love this fic! Kinda upset about the new hair style but not too bad. Why did Nagi run away? I hope that you update again really soon, I don't handle suspense well.
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Reviewed By: mitsi On: November 21, 2004 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What happened? Schu is 'broken'??? But why?? Please continue this!! I can't wait to read more!
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