| "Vacation" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: SesshomaruInuyashaKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 14:06 CST
Comment/Review:
hey i was wondering did u make up 'aiden and raven'? i was just wondering. great story keep up the good work. oh one thing can i be in it too? i'm just asking u don't have to say yes or anything. thanks. ciao
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Title: Nice Work
Reviewed By: YuGiPlayer On: November 30, 2004 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story line..... About Ayna she sounds like a kewl character she is just as calm as Sesshoumaru but as for Aiden and Raven they sound like a couple of great guys; I take it friends of Ayna's? Hey keep up the good work and update more of this story. I want to know what happends to the others including Sesshoumaru and Ayna.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: SweetPuppylover On: November 30, 2004 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ayna.. who ever she is.. well what ever she looks like; She sounds like a wonderful character. Oh I love it when Rin dressed just the same way as Ayna how adorible! Please draw what they look like in this story. Ayna with Sesshoumaru's child.. Twins! Oh.. "Gasp" Oh! I am doing the happy dance in my office.. ops! my boss! (Ducking in the cramped cubical office) So what happens to Kagome and the rest of them anyway?
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