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"The Reason" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: blisblop  On: June 14, 2005 05:31 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
'One shots that are non conclusive and often pointless' Heh,you just described most peoples lives with that.You presented an understandable Itachi,that doesn't happen often.Well done I think.Hmm they will not print this..bummer,I tried.
 Title: ~Doku~
Reviewed By: Tsuki Shinomori [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 19, 2004 20:16 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
Eh.. its ok not very long and you spelled Chuunin wrong >.< Also it wasnt really [i]smooth[/i] if that makes sense.. it didnt flow.. But it was ok i suppose. You really need to stop writing all these one-shots and get on with your Go No Konoha.. yeah. I'll talk to you more about it through AIM or at school.

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