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| "West Side Story" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's interesting so far, though please don't make Hiei get run over by a bus! Anyway, keep the chapters coming! I wanna know what's going to happen next! ^-^
| Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 23:41 CST
Comment/Review:
This is good so far, I want to hear the rest of it and especially where Kurama comes in!
| Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 20:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Hiiiiii- now I get to review since it be my first time reading the first chappy! Nee! ^^ Excellent summary of Hiei's past- I guess we didn't really need to put the Yukina part in there. U_U Sorry about the prologue... *cough* Don't worry, I'll fix it, you don't have to. ^^0 We need to figure out what's wrong with your compy- or! Or we can post it at the cheesy anime sleepover! ^^ Lol, that sleepover will be ROXOR! XD It's on the Saturday after next, right? Bring your memory card this time! *cough cough* Woo, rambling- gomen ne! ^^0 Anyhow, great chapter, sorry about the prologue, Yusuke and Hiei are homeboys HA ha, get chapter two done soon so we can post it! ("Kazuma! Did you drink my apple juice?!")
| Reviewed By: I_stole_Genkais_boyfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 19:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Yah, well, I'm sorry for being such a dumbass, but the prologue got deleted after I beta-ed it. -_- I had to retype the whole thing into Microsoft Word, did some editing, posted it, then I had to delete the file I had saved in MW in case my kaa-san saw it, then the last half of the chapter got deleted when I tried to post it, then when I tried to go back and repost it I remember too late that I had deleted it- so I went through all that crap for an hour and I got a damn lot of nothing. >_< I'M FRIGGING PISSED OFF! -_-+ *sigh* I'll try and post the prologue soon... but I have to retype it... and the first chapter kind of makes sense without the prologue. So I'll have to retype it and post it later. *groan* Just not now... I'm freaking tired... >_
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