Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 11:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow. I like it. Though Naruto is off training with Ero Sennin, and Sasuke is off with Orochimaru, and Sakura is with Tsuade. I think you capture their feelings, 3 years down the road (maybe a few months for us readers) we will see how far they progress. I was thinking on that idea of yours as well, it wasn't till now that I thought of it. Sasuke letting Naruto in so he wouldn't really kill and become his brother. There is more to the Uchila clan then we have been given knowledge off, like what Sasuke found beneath the floor. I found the battle of N&S to be very angsty. Naruto refused to die and Sasuke was battling their demons, when the rain came and N was on the ground, I thought for sure he died. And when Kakashi found him, it so was sad. Poor Kakashi, look at what he has been through, lost one team and sensei later on, went solo to keep people away and now team 7 falls apart. Hopefully in the end I hope they don't turn out like the Sannin of legend, cause they are following into that path. Look at how Jiraya told Naruto to not go after Sasuke. So much heartbreak. Btw who was that guy on the telephone pole when Itachi took our his clan? Was that Kisame or Orochimaru? Keep up the awesome work. I love your portrayl of the characters. coolsa.
|
