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| "Thoughtless Silence and Closed Doors" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: O.O Wow
Reviewed By: Elbereth Tealrose On: June 03, 2005 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O Wow, that was amazing. You really tapped into Satoshi's feelings. You are an excellent writer, and I am currently looking at your other fics too. Wow... that was beautiful. I do not think there are enogh words to describe how touched I was by that. Jaa!\ always, el
| Reviewed By: everwhite On: April 06, 2005 12:59 CDT
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I thought that was a beautiful piece. For some reasons, it reminds me of Yugioh, the whole door in mind idea (but Yugioh's stupid in my opinion). Really creative though! A really original take on Krad and Satoshi's relationship. It also shows how in tune you are to their characters. This is your first dnangel fic? Wow, excellent job!
| Reviewed By: Lord Scribbles On: March 01, 2005 20:12 CST
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Alrighty... Aie, one psychologically tortured Satoshi-sama, coming right up! I'll start off at the end because I want to: That was a nice ending. It was almost 'in your face', but not quite, because Satoshi was never really the type to say 'in your face' anyways, but it was almost defensive, and a little bit broken, too. The idea of Krad playing psychological games with Satoshi is, of course, wonderful and so totally like him, and the idea of Satoshi having doors all throughout his head is absolutely fascinating. I never thought of it like that... but it was well done, especially the idea that Krad would play games with him and MAKE situations where Satoshi actually thanked him for helping him after HURTING him, simply because he was so worn down that he really didn't seem to remember who it was that put him in that situation in the first place. I actually liked the pauses, especially the one that had to do with waiting for Krad. It helped with the flow-or non flow, as it was-in the story, and I enjoyed them, even if they confused me at first. Also, the last bit, the line about Krad lying to him and saying that he'd always be there... It almost sounded as if Satoshi felt like he was betrayed, which goes to show just how messed up Krad made him. All in all, a great job!
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Reviewed By: Legato On: February 25, 2005 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHH I am sooooo confused. I don't get it. Maybe thats just me being stupid and not understanding(like always). I guess i would have enjoyed it much more if i only understode.
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