"There's a Magic Spell in Smiles" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Naruto_Lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 18:20 CDT Comment/Review: Man. You made me cry when you did the last chapter. And I mean that to. This story was really sad. You should become a romance author/authoress. You really good at it.
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Reviewed By: XFactor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 17:56 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It's kinda funny, if you've ever seen the ending of Roseanne (my most favorite TV show, and in my opinion the greatest TV show ever), the ending of the fic kind of seems similar. I dunno, I get the same feeling.. it's a good thing don't worry ^_^ I love these angsty type fics... speaking of which, ever read 'I think I better leave right now' by purrfectly679? If so you should, who knows you might get some inspiration or something. Take care
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Reviewed By: XFactor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 17:42 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yay you uploaded the rest of the fics! Gracias ^_^ I actually felt a tear at my eye at the end. Then I gouged my eye out, but still.. it was nice. It was nice... yah.. pshh, hmm... lalalala... what was I gonna say.... oh yes! About that presents for your reviewers thing. I think a new or slightly used car would do just fine. *grins* orrr maybe not, it's up to you
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Reviewed By: XFactor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 17:49 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: So uhh.. is this done? I don't think you have this story on ff.net and unless you have it somewhere, are you ever going to update this? Or is it just one of those things where you got out 4 chapters then the drive just left ya?
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 23:13 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I like the way your story's going. I hope that you'll update soon!! I hope that you didn't give up on this story....
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