| "Fallen Rose Petals" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: pls continue
Reviewed By: CuddleBunny89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like where the story is going so far. i see you havent touched it in awhile though. ill be keeping my hopes up, checking every now and then. please update soon. id like to see how inuyasha tries getting closer to kagome, how their relationship progresses. if and when sesshomaru finds out about inuyasha intercepting the messanger. what naraku will do now that hes learned hes not even in the running to be kagomes husband/king. and who the mysterious lady is and the young child (i have an idea.. but want to see where you go with it). so please update soon. thanks.
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Reviewed By: chungie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 13:30 CDT
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Very Nicely done!!! ^^ I'm waiting for the next chapter. At first I was just curious but then the story proved itself a suitable taste. Glad that Kagome is in character. Most ppl put her in the catgory of "nicenicenice" but even Kagome has to get rid of her steam. Inuyasha is cocky as ever I see but he's starting to feel something. ~!!!!!!!~ Keep at it! Ja neh!
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Reviewed By: YashaJunkie On: July 07, 2005 04:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please update, i really wanted to know whats going to happen. it's a really good story so far with a lot of potential. i hope you update. :)
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Reviewed By: black girl 06 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 21:42 CDT
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So far so good. Naraku is FATHIFUL? Okay, whatever you say. I like the queen and her personality. I really felt sorry for her and the tragedies she has gone through. I review the rest of your chapters later.
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Reviewed By: Jesse's Girl On: March 26, 2005 20:41 CST
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Thanks hun! I really was in need of a good story to get my mind of the incrediably loud maddness behind the March Maddness goin' down in my livingroom....Sigh....But !!!! Ooooo I so wish you had more chapters, I need somemore Inuyasha goodness! ^^ Keep on writtin' sweetie!! Lol, I liked how Inuyasha doesn't know how to play goldfish and how Shippo was actin' more mature than Kaggie! Kawaii!! ^^
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Reviewed By: dreamy7_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 21:30 CST
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Ooh, that was interesting...I like it! ^_^
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Reviewed By: ApAtHy aNgEl On: March 23, 2005 20:44 CST
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Cool.....a queen.......a gentle princess kagome.....a arrogant prine Inuyasha.......this is gonna be good....oh yeah.....every other kingdom story.....has inuyasha with an incantation......can you not use 'sit?'...that is not a flame....okay?...keep writing.... uPdAte
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Reviewed By: Redneck Chick On: March 18, 2005 14:52 CST
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Interesting... I love it! keept the chapters comming!
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Reviewed By: Jesse's Girl On: March 06, 2005 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooooo! This is good too. I always love fanfictions that are set in castles without kingdoms and nobilty. Yeah! And it's gonna be Inuyasha/Kagoem too! I'm such a sucker but don't leave me hanging!
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Reviewed By: killthetoaddemon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 02:32 CST
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Ooh, that was interesting...I like it! ^_^
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