| "FAKE in Love: Act II, Family and Stake-outs" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: KawaiiYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 12:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why isnt there any higher number than 10 you deserve so much more than that as I've said once before your a totaly awesome writer and you must continue writing or else I will hurt you lol j/k anyway it off to act III for me I cant wait hehehe
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'm headed over to Act III. Just wanted to tell you how amazing your characterization skills are.
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Title: that's wonderful
Reviewed By: evean On: July 01, 2005 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seems I fall in love. You're truly amazing writer. Most of all I love the way you describe Dee and Ryo. I read way too much fics where Ryo behaves like teenage girl with no brain. Thank you for good time.
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Title: Yayyy again
Reviewed By: Enzeru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know I just wrote a rewiew on Act I but I feel it's only fair to rewiew everything I read. I really enjoyed this one to bring in Ryos grandfather and cousins like that was really an idea i liked alot. As I said in act I i couldn't stop reading it and almost got late for work when i lost track of time. **smile** I love it love it love it... Yayyy for grumpy demon. You are great...
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Reviewed By: RC On: March 16, 2005 11:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just goten into fake and it is nice to see such quailty stories, in this fandom. Now I 'm off to read part 1.
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Reviewed By: ingy On: March 15, 2005 09:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry about not getting much commentary. Just rest assured that your characterization is a damn sight better than most, your stories actually has plot unlike too many other FAKE fics, and that you write sex that doesn't look like it was written by a fourteen-year-old. All in all, your stories are better than 95 percent of all other FAKE stories I have read, and I've read a few. Congratulations; I'm eagerly awaiting the next act. P.S: I love the fact that you post the entire story. It's worth waiting a bit longer for.
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Reviewed By: Fangirl4U On: March 15, 2005 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please! I'm dying to know about Ryo's nightmares. Please do an act three. I'll rec you to everyone, you'll have willing slaves.;)
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Title: Lightning Strikes Twice
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grumpy Demon, You seem to be new to the world of FAKE fanfiction, and yet once again, you have managed to create a story that is simultaneously breathtaking, interesting and heartwarming. I have read your first story, and I ADORED it, and I feel just as strongly about your second work. You keep the characters wonderfully in character, while expanding upon them in such interesting ways. I love the direction you have decided to take concerning Ryo and the MacLeans. The little bit of back history you gave regarding Ryo's parents was also wonderfully done, logical, while at the same time being very inventive. I also enjoyed how Ryo deals with it - It simply is what it is, and he handles it with both wisdom and emotional maturity. (So many fans have turned Ryo into a crying mess, and it's wonderful to read something where he is allowed all of the strength Sanami originally invested him with.) As always, the way you develop the relationship between Ryo and Dee was brilliant - passionate, loving, honest, and gentle, all of the while remaining very sexual at the same time. You keep both Dee and Ryo as strong men (which too many FAKE authors fail to do), while creating distinct personalities for each of them. The way you handle Bicky and Dee's relationship is also wonderful. What you have done as an author is inspire complete trust in your readers, and as such, we eagerly await whatever journey you decide to take us on. I can't wait for your next FAKE story. Please, update soon!
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Reviewed By: sabacat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 12:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was as awesome as Act I! I love the whole estranged family history you've given Ryo. Martin's a real slimeball and I can't wait to see what you've got in store for him! Rose is another who could be called a slimeball... I really loved it when Dee came in and punched him. He totally deserved it for trying to take advantage of Ryo. You're definitely one of the most talented FAKE fic writers out there... in both creativity and skills! I'm very much looking forward to reading Act III!
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Title: firgodes7@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: gddsinferno On: March 11, 2005 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off I have to say that I enjoyed both of your FAKE stories. I must say that you are a impressive writer. Have you thought of writing on other levels? The way you describe the characters and their actions has was very remarkable. I would like to see a litle bit of ooc,but not enough to do a overkill.I think that writers can go so far,and stretch your writing and ideas for plots.I hope to see you write more in the future and keep up the good work.
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Title: U did it again!
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 07:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, u seem to have done it again Grumpy Demon! I have to say, even with only 2 fics wrotten, U are by far the best FAKE author I have ever came across. I can't get over how u keep having the best plots, the characters so in character that u could fool anyone that Sanami Matoh wrote this, and wonderful lemons to add to the whole package. U should be very proud of urself. U are an excellent author and I am looking foward to any future works from u. I can't wait until FAKE Act III comes out! Good luck with ur future writings and keep up the excellent work.
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