"Where Are You Now" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: my review Reviewed By: Lady Frei [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 12:13 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please continue, I love it
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Reviewed By: milady17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 14:36 CST Comment/Review: WOOT! First to review. This has a suitable plot so far, but you need to work more on keeping to one tense. Was, is...Past is preferable; it just sounds better. Maybe try to word you sentances better and use more adjectives. But I think you've got real potential! _Milady17_
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