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| "You Smiled" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Clairice-Sarah [not logged] On: March 20, 2005 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome... reminds me of my first BF. DAMN THAT JERK!!!! Anywho, I just wrote and put up my own poem for Sango and Miroku. Sad the best relationships never seem to work... lots of emotion even though it isn't very long
| Reviewed By: Kali Ma [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this one, but the thing is that there is a difference in the flow of the words at certain points... work on how your word flow goes, and then your poetry will get better
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