"A light in the dark." Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Ceribi Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 17:09 CDT Comment/Review: Me: I UPDATED HERE! Only... it's nothing new. Still, make me feel special and review! Myarra: ... Me: I can't believe that, whenever my other alter-egos fall asleep, it's her I'm stuck with. Myarra: HEY! Me: Tee-hee. Anywhoosle! I was rereading this. I like it. Can I be in it as Hikari Daeron, the notorious cousin of Joey Wheeler? I'd LOVE that. Myarra: You're actually in a story that she posted here. Me: THAT'S RIGHT! I forgot about that, thanks Arra! Myarra: Eh. Me: Yeah, in 'Ever After' -- which I posted here -- you're in it. I'm in it too, but hey... Myarra: *rolls eyes* Me: Ehehehehe. Whatever. UPDATE YOUR OTHER STORIES, IT'S SUMMER BREAK!
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Title: YAY Reviewed By: Ceribi Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 18:26 CDT Comment/Review: Me: Very much awesome! Ceribi: Of course. Me: I need to write the sequel of New Professors... woops. But anywhoosle! Loved it, I love how Joey comes AND SAVES THE WORLD! Oh crap! I need to watch Batman! *yay the 60s!* BYE!
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Reviewed By: Lily Fairy (not logged in) On: May 12, 2005 10:48 CDT Comment/Review: Hey, great chappie! I expected Seto to punch the punk...^_^; I feel so bad for Elizabeth. Update soon Jazz!
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Reviewed By: Darkfire Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 21:41 CDT Comment/Review: Poor Jazz. don't ya know AM gives you extra credit? Take home a new set every day. Just a tip. And nove chapter. I was almost expecting her to find Seto next. ^^U
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Title: I feel bad for her... Reviewed By: Ceribi Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 08:59 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Me: WOOOOOOOOOOOAH Jazz, don't you think that she would be more shocked and sad if her mother was just shot by her father? Other than that, I WANT MORE! Ceribi: We're trying to finish our stories too. Me: Not happening. T____T And I feel like crap. Altariel: *pats me on head* ME: Thanks, Yami. Myarra: *rolls eyes* Me: What about your other stories? Please update them as well as this! (and gun is spelled gun. not gone lol.) and another thing -- do you have a xanga?
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Reviewed By: Darkfire Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 11:30 CST Comment/Review: *pounces on Jazz* Hiya! ^^ Continue, pwease!
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Reviewed By: Lily Fairy (not logged in) On: March 31, 2005 11:23 CST Comment/Review: CONTINUE! I INSIST! It's a great beginning, and you HAVE GOT to continue!
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