Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 10:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story so far, make the next chapters longer and it'll be fantastic! I like that you've gone straight into the story and not written in first person... which means this is not self insertion, right? I don't care either way. Continue soon, I like stories with OC's, and unlike many of the OC stories out there yours is well-written and your G+S are great. Although I can't give you full marks for originality yet, I expect I will in later chapters, everyone has got there own style and way of writing so once I get further into the story I'll be able to see it and give you a higher orig. mark. Keep up the great work and update soon, K?
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