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| "Soulless Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] | Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 12:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good fic. No a brillant fic. U write with real passion and have very good English since u used 2 be German. I hate Davis bashing. We could start a group | Reviewed By: AngelWingAsh [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2002 20:01 CDT
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Wow...... finally- a sad story about Daisuke.... *sniff,sniff* WAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! God, that was good!!!!^___________________^
Just remeber in my fanfics- DAILEY 4-EVER!!!!!!! In case you wanna know what that means... it means Daisuke/Ashley (Ashley's my made-up character from my stories and she's in.... Uh-oh, I can't spoil it for Dreams, Romances, and Reality story!) Also, if you wanna e-mail or AIM the creator of Rain Katrinka, her e-mail is AngelPuppyBlue@aol.com and her AIM is AngelPuppyBlue! She sez to all the people that liked her character: THANX!!!!!!!!!! *peace sign*
*APB'll become a MM.org member soon, w/h her new fic, also co-written by ME!!! | Reviewed By: Rei the Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2002 04:29 CST
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Now that I've calmed down, I must say marvellous job! I was a good story, the type of story that you have to go and see again, just to see if something has been added to it. Those are hard to find. So, you dug up a gem story, Class 101. | Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2002 10:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I already submitted a review for the epilogue for FanFiction.net, but I liked it so much I thought I should share it here as well. Any ways, such a beautiful story, wonderful told mostly by Jun's POV. Even if Daisuke's path to recovery may take long time or even forever, he does so with every step he takes on his own. He also finds strength from his friends, family, and especially his Sister Jun. Again, very beautiful work.
~ Jodi S. | Reviewed By: Rei the Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2002 01:09 CST
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*SOB!* WAAHHH!! *Blows nose on a bedsheet* So sad...so brilliant...I need another bedsheet...WAAHHH!!! | Reviewed By: A-man [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2002 09:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PERFECT SCORE ON MY CARD. IF I COULD RECOMEND THAT YOU WRITE A SECOND EPILOGUE FROM DAVIS' POV WHEN HE TALKS WITH HIS FRIENDS. I DO HOWEVER LOVE THE FACT THAT THE MAJORITY OF THE STORY IS TOLD FROM JUN'S PERSPECTIVE SINCE USUALLY AN AUTHOR WOULD HAVE PICKED ONE OF THE OTHER DIGIDESTINED | Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2002 11:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my... This was so wonderful! Started off very sad then really ended beautifully! Amazing! Hoorray for making Jun tell the story! Really neat way of handling her character through the troubling times of possibly losing her brother.
Beautiful work!
Sorry, I would have stopped and rated each chapter but... I just couldn't. This story was soooo captivating, I couldn't just stop! I had to continue! Neato!
Gee, an epilogue? I can't wait!
~ Jodi S. | Reviewed By: Devidramon On: December 06, 2001 02:26 CST
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Brilliant. Keep it up. I liked the last part, where we hear from Davis himself. He has to want to come out of it himself, doesn't he? What can they tell him that will make him want to come back? Love the Jun POV. | Reviewed By: sailorgotland [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2001 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
=^.^= I love this fic! :D I think your English is perfect, but what do I know, since I'm a Swede who's also been learning English in School...:P Heh... I've seen all my Digimon on RTL2, and on a Swedish channel, but they show the Americanized dub, so I like the German dub much better... Anyway... ^^;;
I love the fact that you focus on Jun and Daisuke... The Motomiya's rock! *schnoggles Daisuke-plushie* And this is really deep... T_T *wails* DAI-CHAAAAN...!!! ^^;; Keep it up, ne? You have too! :D | Reviewed By: Random Queen On: December 05, 2001 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will try to make this my first short review! I like your writing. It reminds me of thoughts I have before I go to bed. Depressing thoughts that make me relaxed and carefree. | Reviewed By: psycomanofdeath On: November 19, 2001 16:55 CST
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Good story so far. Will you make Daikari? PUHLEEEEEEEESSSEE????? Sorry please? | Reviewed By: Angel Sakura On: November 19, 2001 19:14 CST
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This is a good fic. Dai is one of my favorite characters. I want to know what happen to poor Dai. I can't wait for next chapter! | Reviewed By: Random Queen On: November 22, 2001 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love stories with death in them.Not just because Myotismon is my favorite Digimon. They just make you feel like the people in your life are so important to you, even if you don't tell them. Davis is definately my favorite male character. Besides Myotismon. And Matt! ^-^ I love Matt. Not as much as Myotismon, but Matt and Davis are alike me in allot of ways. I am VERY,VERY,VERY, VERY, VERY hard-headed. And I mean that as a figure of speech and literally. There was this one time...well, I'm not gonna get into it now. If I told you how many times I've gotten hit in the head from birth to this very day, you and me would be either old geezers, or dead. Of course, I'm being sarcastic. It would probably only take up two or three front and back of college ruled paper, and this time, I'm not sarcastic. Do you know how hard that is for me? I'm like Davis in many other ways. Loud, slightly annoying, my best friends think I'd be a good couple with Davis...but I LOVE MYOTISMON! No one will take my sweetheart away from me! If your out there, Love, look me up in the phone book! | Reviewed By: Random Queen On: November 22, 2001 20:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
My last review was REALLY long. This will be shory. Sorry, you are being redundant. I know you're telling Jun's thoughts, I would be redundant, also, but in a new chapter, I would have different thoughts, which you did, slightly. Maybe the next chapter should be more of a story if you are doing one. Like talking, Jun could still be the main character, you could use I and me, for her, but maybe have her there with Kari or Matt! Yes...Matt. I like that thought. You could make her in the room alone with Matt, oh yes, and Davis.Sorry I forgot abnout him. MATT! JUN! MWhahahahahahahahahahahaha! Okay, I *tried* to make it short. I tried. |
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