| "Don't leave!!" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 16:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
.... very well put together ,if short.... and you have a problem... it's cut off and Inuyasha's outfit is armor..... a simple knife would never be able to pierce it.... but on the whole, it's a good story...
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Title: Pretty good.
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 19:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey. This was pretty good. A little suggestios, make the spoken phrases two spaces apart, so its not cut off or confused. I love the way you ended though. Although tragic, love prevailed. I thought it was wonderful. Keep up the good work!
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