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"The Awakening (Sequel)" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: Lily Fairy [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 18, 2005 14:27 CDT
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I see that you fixed the fiance thing! Great! I was hoping for another chappie though :( Oh well...let's hope you update soon!
 Reviewed By: Lily Fairy [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 16, 2005 18:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Those lovebirds...kissing every two seconds, lol. Um, I don't know if you noticed, but in the summary, you wrote that Seto and Kisara had already gotten married, but in the first paragraph, you wrote that Seto was her fiance. Just telling ya! Can't wait for the next chappie!

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