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"The Unforgivable Sin" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ]
 Reviewed By: Gijinka Renamon [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 20, 2005 17:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting. I'm not sure I want to find out what happens at the end of FMA, because I'm starting to doubt if the Elric brothers will ever return to normal...
 Title: question??????
Reviewed By: Koolaid smile [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 14, 2005 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HI, uh, I'm a giant fan of full metal alchemist. But, me and my slow self have a question. Do you know the whole rule for alchemy? You covered the 1st part in your summary but what about the rule that states equivilant exchange? If you know the whole rule, could you e-mail it to me? [lightbuttyfly8@aol.com] I plan on writing a full metal alchemist fic soon, but I need to be able to remember that damn rule if I'm gonna write this fic without screwing it up. Oh yeah, nice job on ya fic, it's very interesting [crossovers normally are] Keep it up, and plz e-mail me. okay? buh bye
 Title: Maruken
Reviewed By: Dreamwolf Outkast [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 18, 2005 12:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh!! This is AWESOME!! Will Akira meet up with the other homunculi? He and Envy should get aong great afterall, they both want to kill their brother or stepbrothers in Envy's case. Illusory Alchemist, a fitting name for Ryou, by the way when will Ryou find out about the Elric's attempt? And where's Al? Will they send Ryou to Izumi to get straightened out over the 'Akira' issue?
 Title: where is it?
Reviewed By: Karin starsen  On: May 15, 2005 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please tell me what happened to a fragmented tale!! I cannot find it anywhere? did you stop writing it?! but i was right in the middle! tell me through a review on FF . n e t please!
 Reviewed By: Maruken  On: April 27, 2005 21:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Is Bakura the homunculi? I thought Ed died by Envy's hand. {killed by your own stepbrother.} I like this crossover, please continue.
 Reviewed By: -Kurai- [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 24, 2005 19:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it, like kitsuxe I like both and yes it was very smart to combine them. Keep up the good work.
 Reviewed By: kitsuxe  On: April 24, 2005 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
yay, the first to review. i really like yu-gi-oh and fullmetal alchemist, combining them was quite clever. well, i liked it and i hope ya keep updating

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