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| "FAKE in Love: Act VI, Prejudice and Lovers" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Reviewed By: Insert_Pseudonym [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2013 04:45 EDT
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Wow, you keep getting better and better! This was a quite unusual storyline, but I REALLY enjoyed it. Very creative. Damn evil nun, and poor Dee! I just wanted to hug him. Oh and the lemons... what can I say? I love Ryo topping Dee, I love light bondage, so I was thrilled when you included both this time! (and no interruptions! Yay! :D ) I'm looking forward to reading the next Act - see you there! ;) | Reviewed By: jdr1184 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 15:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such lemony goodness. I found the evil nun story line very compelling when I was recovering from the fruit fest. My mom is very Catholic but she shares Penguin's view. Yikes, you spoiled us with this one. I few of the scene changes kind of through me, but overall you did a great job.
| Reviewed By: KawaiiYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 10:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stupid evil nun I wish I could say something really bad about her then again I can't grrrr I really love this one you got so into detail with Dee feeling it left me feeling so so whaaaaaaaaaa yeah that the best word I can think of at the moment well it on to act VII for me hehehe see you there!!!!
| Reviewed By: bryt Columbia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 14:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your stories are so witty. The snappy dialogue is one of your biggest strengths. I enjoy it so much and I'm in awe of you on so many levels: organization, attention to detail, plot, pacing, character and relationship development ( both within the stories and long term over the timeline of all your stories), choice of vocabulary, mood, your facilty with the English language, and your consistency. Consistency is so important! Well, to me, anyway. Your stories are consistent in quality. Your characters are consistent in their behaviour. Your output is level and balanced. I really appreciate that. It inspires trust in your readers. I totally trust you to put out a quality product. I enjoyed the part where Bikky defended Dee from the nasty Sister Beatrice. As a kid, he was free to say what the adults couldn't. He sensed that Dee was somehow not able to defend himself in his usual aggressive and smartass way. Of course we all know that Bikky and Dee love each other deep down, and the fact that you don't directly allude to it makes it more powerful and believable. In fact, speaking of Bikky, he was a character I'll confess I was never happy to see in the manga because of his little habit of always rushing in and ruining tender moments. However, your Bikky is just so funny that I look forward to his scenes. He still ruins his fair share of promising lemons, but I don't mind because I know you'll include another one where you'll have Bikky conveniently away for a few hours. ( See, that's what I mean about 'trust'!) With Sanami Matoh, it was like "Oh Gawd, that was IT for this whole book and Bikky just ruined it! Now wait for the next book!" Both the lemons in this story were exceptionately passionate and beautiful. I could really feel the power of their desire and the deep emotional connection between Ryo and Dee. That connection, and their loyalty to each other is something you have held true to in all your stories. I am working my way through Fake In Love and I want you to know how happy I feel when I look at the still-long list of stories by you that I haven't read yet! I know that someday I'll come to the end, and I guess then I'll just have to start back at the beginning and read them all over again. Thank you, thank you thank you from the bottom of my heart.
| Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 01:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Closing in on 2 AM and heading to Act VII. I really enjoyed this one.
| Title: sry...forgot to rate
Reviewed By: GarnetKoryu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am a real fan of your work and last time i was in a rush, sry...i hope you keep writing fics, on FAKE or other titles, it doesn't matter, i'll read it all you're really good.. anyways, i c u later, byebye
| Reviewed By: GarnetKoryu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 23:11 EDT
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ok, i just wanted to say that i love all of your work , you are an exilerating author and i can't beilive that you're not a professional(or mabey you are... o.O) i love it when i get an annoying large ammount of e-mails from mediaminer to tell me you've written more please continue to write such wonderful work -bye
| Reviewed By: HarvUGirl On: May 11, 2005 15:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your stories are astounding! I've printed them out and read them every chance I've had in between classes and work. They are just beautiful, and I look anxiously every day hoping for more!
| Reviewed By: Enzeru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 09:19 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you'r fic left me at a loss of words. I so enjoy your fake acts. and how you seem to be able to really capture a persons feelings like you do. In your fics one really understand how the characters are feeling because you get so drawn in to the story that you suffer right along with them. **Well I do at least... but then maby I'm just wierd??? Nee hope not** And when something good happens and they are happy I cant help but smile with them. :) Well Once again it's a great fic and I had a really good time reading it... Bye for now //Enzeru
| Title: Powerful and Sublime
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 16:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again you have posted a new Act to your FAKE series. And again, after reading it carefully, you took my breath away. I actually read this Act several days ago & have reread it twice since then. It was so powerful & emotional an experience for me, I didn't know how to even begin to say what I wanted to say about it until now. This Act you deal with the issues of homophobia. Not only that, you deal honestly with the after effects. I LIVE in NYC, & can tell you there's a reason so many homosexual people live here. They can go through their lives without being bothered about their sexual preferences. But that doesn't mean it doesn't exist here, nor that they don't get criticized for who they choose to love. How you handled it, with Dee getting the worst kind of remarks at the very place he considers home was succinct & tremendous. That's how it really happens. When the place you view as the safest in the world ends up being not, the pain is of the worst kind. How you portrayed that pain & devastation, & then the love & support all surrounding Dee was BRILLIANT! Understated, but still explosive & powerful. It was an honest, mature look at the effects of homophobia and you handled it perfectly. As always, your relationships were solid and well developed. You introduced a wonderfully interesting OC, & your grammar was the best it's ever been. As for your lemons, what can I say? The scene with Ryo loving Dee was the BEST sex scene I've EVER read. P | Title: Boy, do I love these!
Reviewed By: Spunky87 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 09:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great Act VI! I've read all your acts and i just love your writing. I agree with some of the other comments, that your portrayal as Ryo as dominant was so great! I also loved the last lemon scene with Ryo begging for more. Please keep writing these, you have a wonderful series going.
| Title: Continued Review
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 23:41 EDT
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In reality, I love everything about this story, so it would be kinda stupid to talk about the whole story all over again. Just know that I thought it was perfect. The characters, the plot, the lemons, God I cannot and never shall get over ur talent. Also one more thing *huggles* That was so sweet of u to mention me in ur final thoughts. Lot's of love to u too!! LISA! LISA! LISA! ^^ Love ya girl! Well I better get going. I can't wait for ur next FAKE Act. Bring on the fics!! I'll be waiting for them!! Dee and Ryo 4 eva!!! See ya Lisa, I know u won't dissapoint me. U never do. ^_^
| Title: FAKE At It's Best- Watch Out Sanami Matoh!!
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 23:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lisa, I don't know how many times I've said this but I gotta say it. U've done it again!!! This story, along with ur others, is now a favorite of mine. I love all ur storie. Ur talent never seems to fade and that's a good thing. Now this story, lemme say this, was absolutely beautiful. I think my favorite part was when Dee needed to be comforted and loved by Ryo. By the way, the way u made Ryo dominate was fantastic. It was perfect and exactly how I pictured Ryo to being during his first time. To him it was not about being dominate, but to love Dee as much as possible and to give him the comfort he needed. He was careful, gentle, and knew how to pleasure. The way I think is that Ryo's sexual side grows over time and shall continue so on. I hope to see Ryo dominate in some of ur next stories. And the lemon at the end with the handcuff scene, wow. That's all I can think of. Wow. It was so sexy when Ryo started becoming vocal at the end, saying what he wanted ^^. Now then, onto more subjects. Ur story lines continue to be wonderful and well thought out. I swear to God u could be Sanami Matoh or even better!! She should watch out cause here's a FAKE writer who know's how to write!! Also, I really hated Sister Beatrice. I hate people like her. But her part of the story was important. It gave Dee a chance to really think about his sexuality and how he loved Ryo more then anything and that it was ok to be bi and in love with a man. In the end, he's still accepted and can be happy.
| Reviewed By: sabacat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 21:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I saw this this morning, and couldn't wait until I got home this evening so I could read it! AWESOME!!!
| Reviewed By: DeeRyoFan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 21:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've sent you a lengthy email with details. What can I say: I love your stuff! :) ~DeeRyoFan
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