| "Waltz" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
Title: sweet
Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was beyond sweet and it blended so well
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon *I thought i was logged ion but i wasn't so i have to give an explanation for no reason and to take up space* On: July 06, 2006 08:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
White Wolf of the Moon: Dang now i wish i had read this earlier. Loup: You baka you should have read alot of things earlier. White Wolf of the Moon: *remembers new guidlines* Bad thoughts. Sita: Your story was good, it was so good in fact *I shoot her the death glare* Julia: How come i can't do that. Ray: because you are evil *Julia commences on the attacking of him* Wolf: Kill him. Ookami: ME thinks i be the sensible one now. White Wolf of the Moon: Okay sita you can say what you want now. Ookami: I correct myself now. Sita: *gets up on the podium and coughs to get everyones attantion* Okay this story was very good it made the master cry White Wolf of the Moon: *inturupts* I had something in my eye. Sita: Sure, and we will give you this your last thing that you had said is so very much true no doubt about that. White Wolf of the Moon: Now that i have been embarased goodbye.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 00:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
yo dude, this was totally amazing, like you said never under estimate the powr of a waltz! i love it! and for the first time i think i don't totally hate Kikyo! wow now that is power, you can do anything you want with your words, so choose them wisly. grate story, i look forward to your others! MG
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Title: Kawaii!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 17:05 CDT
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C-gurl! I loved this. It was so sweet & innocent! I loved the terms you used for the jewel & it was just sugary overall. Lovely!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Lunar_storm(tis me name here forgot to login xD) On: January 16, 2006 05:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i allmost cryed for a second there when they were she started dancing and then started crying about inuyasha might having to go and then when they told eachother they loved one another and then kikyo arived, i was so happy this story wasent angst, and well yeah this story is really good and i hope more people read it and you continue to write more storys like it, more long one shots , about inuyasha and kagome, cause they are allways the best anyway i need to go to bed its 5:22am here and its monday lol school is gonna be hell anyway yeah night and GREAT STORY BethieK.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this story twice, now, and I still love it!!!!! You are an awesome writer. Never stop with your amazing talent!!!
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Reviewed By: Sinashi On: November 16, 2005 15:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Keep writin it was real good
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 15:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
that's an awesome story you got there! I really love the way you purify the jewel too... well, I was about to say "update soon", but it's already the end! lol. see ya!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 15:46 CDT
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this is an awsome story. i love how you purified the jewel. just perfect...well see ya, Zirra
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 17:02 CDT
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Aw, that story was so cute!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: kagomestanton* am i ever logged on?* On: May 04, 2005 16:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOL you're reading my story?!! that's funny. i like it alot!!! WAY BETTER THAN MINE!!! lol... so maybe i'll talk to you soon!! Bye!
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Reviewed By: Kicnlus_inuforeva [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 10:24 CDT
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Thank you so much for reviewing my story! Hopefully it'll be updated soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: Yashagal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 21:14 CDT
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AWWW!!! Sweet and sappy ending (my favorite). Also Inu ending up with Kag (also my favorite). Aweosme Story!!! Please write some new stories!!!
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Reviewed By: This is Kicnlus_inuforeva On: May 03, 2005 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was suuuuch a kawaii ending!!!!! It was great! I love the way you ended it - "Never underestimate the power of the waltz" It was such a good way to end!!! Write more!
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Reviewed By: Zackzman On: May 03, 2005 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, ur a great writer, freakin awesome, good job
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Reviewed By: Yashagal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 20:45 CDT
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AWWWW!!! That was sweet. And you made kikyo not too evil. I think she is a little evil, but not too much. I hope you continue with this story. I love it!!!
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Reviewed By: Zackzman On: May 02, 2005 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
again another great chapter....UPDATE w00t
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Reviewed By: zackzman On: May 01, 2005 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story, plz update. P.S. dont let Inuyasha go to Hell with Kikyo.
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Reviewed By: this is Kicnlus_inuforeva again! On: May 01, 2005 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome new chapter! Wah..why does KIKYOU have to ruin it????? It's sooooooo good keep it up! That's really cute how they dance! Don't stop writing! EVER! Haha - have a cookie! *hands you a cookie* Write!
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Reviewed By: kagomestanton *am i ever signed in?* On: May 01, 2005 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story. absolutely wonderful... please update soon 'cause it's a cliffhanger and i hate those and i swear to god if he goes to hell with Kikyou... lol just kidding. i love it. i love you. awsome story... update soon!
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Reviewed By: Yashagal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 11:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Love the story (as always). You are a great writer. Keep updating. Glad to make you happy with my reviews as well.
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Reviewed By: Kicnlus_inuforeva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heeey! Great story you got here! I'm so sorry - I've been reading but I forgot to review! Forgive me! This is SO good! Keep it up! Can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Yashagal [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 14:24 CDT
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Me again. Told you I loved your story. If I find one i love (like yours) I stick with it and read it til the end. Keep Updating!!!
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Reviewed By: Yashagal [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 20:16 CDT
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Very good story so far. Can't wait to read more!!
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