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"Arms to Hold You" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
Title: FFARG Review Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 00:25 CDT Comment/Review: Very nice, the perspective was well done. However, I would sugeest a beta reader for some of the sentances, and a bit of other grammer work. (For a Beta Reader, plese go to the Beta/Pre-Readers and Writing Help section of MMer Forums.) If you went over some more specific events, (Like what you did with InuYasha getting shot) this fic might do better. Aside from that, this was a good fic, and please keep submitting to FFARG.
Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 20:14 CDT Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: YAY! I get to be the first reviewer! and I must say that I LOVED THIS! I loved the why you took inuyashas life and sumed it up in the dream and had kagome on the out side trying to rech him. it was verry well writen and I hope you keep on writing this good! ^__^

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