| "In the City at Night" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: missssy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 14:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story was absolutely great, i've never been so into a story like i was with this one. lol. great work!
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Reviewed By: SA198 On: October 03, 2006 18:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's a really good story. It's your fault I've only gotten 5 hours of sleep at night these past few days! It was that good! Write the sequel!
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Title: In The City at Night
Reviewed By: Syngi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very well written but it took me a moment to realize who was doing what. There was no explanation at the beginning to let me know that Duo wasn't anymore. I know later on it was all explaned and done well, but a little warning would have been good. Otherwise the flow was even and consistant and the characterisation was well thought out and whole. I enjoyed it and look forward to the sequel in due time. Thank you. Syngi
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: CircleKV0012 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 20:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story! I love it. What's up with Duo I mean Jordan? And's up with the not doing Chai but doing all these other women, mmmm? Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: Write more
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 10:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Continue this as soon as possible, ky... i've gotten ants, waiting for something other than the iieji and Blood on the window series... BTW, i've read you on fanfiction.net
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