"Symbolism" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Ellie On: July 23, 2005 13:16 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow... it's sappy, but I really like it! Just the right amount of cuteness and awkwardnesss. Unfortunately, I couldn't see the picture *sob* maybe there was a typo in the url?
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Reviewed By: Aldalote [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 11:50 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This was a great fic, really cute and original too. Everyone was pretty "in character" in my opinion. EdxWin is far superior to EdxRoy. The only problem is that the paragraphs are all cattywampus, it caused me to pass this story by once becuase it was hard to read. I bet if you fix what I think is mm.org's fault anyway, you'll have a hit.
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