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Reviewed By: trackstr88 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 02:46 CDT
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wow! i really like the story! i'm glad that i read the story before this one, otherwise i would be completely lost!!!! it sucks that inu died but i guess in the end kagome ending up w/ sesh sounds cool... altho inu/sesh seemed a little out of character with all of the emotional parts they had together. but in a way it was good because no one ever really writes them as being tough men with a soft side. O well long story short your story was really good & written very well!!!
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Reviewed By: fire maiden On: June 02, 2006 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
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please rewrite chapter 32. it does not make sense. remember the soul connection. if one was to die then the other would follow. it JUST does not make sense. so do this as soon as possible
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Reviewed By: fire maiden On: May 28, 2006 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you must redo chapter 32 because its not right! kagome should have died! here are some of my ideas. let kagome and sesshomaru die and then meet inuyasha in hell. once they get there let a deal be made. the deal is when naraku has the jewel and whoever wins gets to go back on earth. if you loose their soul is stuck in hell and cannot be reincarnated. its inuyasha, kagome, and sesshomaru against naraku,kikyo, kagura. they battle(add details) then inuyasha wins they go back to earth and kagome givs birth. SO PLEASE UPDATE THIS SOON!
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Reviewed By: inuyashasramen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 17:19 CDT
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please, please please update! its so addicting! ^_^
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Reviewed By: red dragon55 On: May 08, 2006 07:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very kewl and sad. i m eager to read wat happens next! update soon!
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Reviewed By: fire girl On: May 08, 2006 06:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this is so intresting i luv it! please update soon!
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Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: Littlesuteinu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 01:45 CDT
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS!!
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Title: I love this story!
Reviewed By: LittleSuteinu On: March 26, 2006 13:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and can't wait to read more. You are a wonderful writer and I'm enjoying reading this story. (smile waves and walks off) -LittleSuteinu
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: January 16, 2006 23:22 CST
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Thing are getting are going to get really bad. First Kagome is finding out more and more about the sites. The closer she gets the more danger she's in. Second Kikyo and company need to stop killing off their men or their not going to have anyone left. And I know she goesn't want to do the dirty work herself.
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Reviewed By: marbear411 (not logged in) On: January 14, 2006 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love The Story!!!!! Keep Going Plz!!!!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: December 30, 2005 21:57 CST
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Sorr about your aunt. Ayame made it out ok that is great. Plus her and Kogua are going to work on their problems and get back together. Papa Sess is so sweet. And Rin is so smart and brave for someone her age. Kagome better be care, with a baby on the way. But her and Inuyasha were always stubborn.
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Title: NNNNNoooooooooo!!!!!
Reviewed By: Marbear411 On: December 30, 2005 00:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Story is The Best I've read so far And I have read some pretty good Stories!!! Plz Make The Next one quick!!! I will die if I have to wait anylonger!!!! Plz E-mail Me When You Post The new one Up!!!! marbear411@yahoo.com P.S. If You Don't Mind I Will Share This Story in a few inuyasha groups...Theres one with over 900 members!!^o^ From your #1 Fan
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Reviewed By: kags1 On: December 29, 2005 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls update soon
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Reviewed By: ANgel~of~Dreams On: December 23, 2005 03:46 CST
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i love it please update as soon as possible please
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: December 10, 2005 15:23 CST
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NNNNNNOOOOOOO! Poor Ayame! Go Rin Go! Rin is really smart for her age. She knows how to work the phone and all. I hope Papa Sesshy makes it in time. Kogua is going to have a pain attack when he hears about this.
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