| "innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Cool
Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 13:37 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so col you would never expest that Inuyasha and Kagome would met like that.
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Reviewed By: inuyashasgirl159 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 13:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey...thanx for the advise about the paragraghs i will try to write another chaper. yes xxxamy_leeXXX, the chapter is weird cause i am weird....lol
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Reviewed By: xxxamy_leexxx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 21:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow, the end of that chap was kinda weird... but anywayz, like i said before, you should paragraph instead of having one big blob of words, hope u update soon ~Rav3n~
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Reviewed By: Rav3n [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 13:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like this story alot, but you should paragraph things so ppl dont get confused with whos saying what. cant wait for the next chappy to come out, update asap!! ~Rav3n~
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