| "Real eyes Realize Real lies" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: stix On: September 22, 2005 19:33 CDT
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please update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 08, 2005 08:12 CDT
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i loved these chapters. they were great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very intertaining please update soon
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 22:34 CDT
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That was totally wicked dude!LOL!Update soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: July 06, 2005 07:44 CDT
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i loved this story. it was great. please add more to this story.
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 17:29 CDT
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now thats just mean
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Reviewed By: Inukochan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm. Not bad! ^^ Both were short, but that's ok. I did notice a bit of grammar, not that serious though, just a few mishaps happens to everyone!n_n Also the way chapter two was put together, because the chapter was shorter it wasn't as bad as what it could have been. However, when you crunch the paragraphs together like that it makes it more difficult to read. Other than those few things, it was good. I do look forward to reading more whent the next chapter is posted! ^^ Ja ne. ~Inukochan~
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Title: another review by me
Reviewed By: AnimeChick13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhh, keep updating. i cant wait till ya git the next part done.
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Reviewed By: AnimeChick13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummm, it was kinda short but it was intresting. kewl.
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sounds very interesting, please keep updating.
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