This comment has nothing to do with this fanfic other than the title.
Thirty years ago, my marriage was crumbling and my two step-daughters acquired a stray tortoiseshell with white cat. We got the cat vaccinated and found out that, of course, she …
Interesting start. However, there are several "Huh?" moments.
The first was, "Her two prized possessions with a small her grandfather gave her last year and a ....." Is "with" supposed to be "were" or is something missing? "A small her grandfath…