| "Rhandi the Cat Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: ARG
Reviewed By: corynth [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 17:20
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I'd put some different values in her skin. It's looking a little bit flat now. Also, the coloring on the hair looks like it's a little too smooth. However, overall, I think that your coloring is very good. I'm a little unsure of what those white dots on her skin are. If they're sparkles from being so hot and oiled up, then try zooming in on them really close, take the smudger, and pull tiny lines from the center so that it looks a little more asterisk-like. I like how you colored her fuzzy bra (and fuzzy wrist & ankle things), and her sandals also look really well done (too bad the text is covering them!) The lips need to be defined a bit more; give them the sort of outline treatment that you give the eyes. I'm not sure I dig the background; I think that a more subtle one with colors that didn't compete so much would work better (notice how it's a little difficult to visually separate her hair from the bg in the top right b/c they're the same color. | Title: A.R.G.
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 11:12
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I tried to comment the other day, but my computer had other ideas. Well I like this pix overall. The hair really does flow. The only think I really don't like is the color of her collar, and thats just cuz it doesn't match her clothing. Some darker shadow on the skin would be nice, and if you could bring the color to the line art elimating the 'white' that would make it even better than it is.~F | Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 19:01
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Haha, the hands do look weird O_o I was trying for a different angle but...it's an easy fix on the comp when I can get back round to it ^-^ | Title: Arg
Reviewed By: Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 16:42
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Nicely done however you do need work with the prepestive of her lower legs and harms. Try starting your drawing with a stickfigure and build from there. If the pose and the movement of the stickfigure don't look possible then erase it and try again, it's always a nice base to use for forshortening. The coloring is really nice except that some of the line art is greyed out and there are some white specks here and there. I suggest using layers and going over your lineart once more to give it a strong black line. You have a very smooth coloring technique that's appealing to the eyes, also you did a good job on the anatomy as well. The background is also a really nice touch and goes with the main figure so well. Overall nicely done. Destiny | Reviewed By: zombi3d [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 09:58
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well you need to work more on proportions and prespective ( hands, arms and feet mostly). other than that, this is one hot sexy mama, love the coloring and skin tones, love the eyes, awesome hair; it flows wells , and those two hearts are nice touch. good job! .......A.R.G. | Title: Yeah for my birthday!
Reviewed By: Phlie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 22:44
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Drawing Skill: 10 of 10
Use of Medium: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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You know that I love this! I'm so happy that you drew this for me! It makes me feel so special!
I love her eyes! And the blue and green look so good together! |
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