| "Sno Boarder Girl & Sub-Zero" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Arg
Reviewed By: Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 15:11
Comment/Review:
Wonderfully done, the only things that I may suggest are to round her fingertips a bit more and adding a background. Your style is very unique and welcoming, great job with anatomy and on the atmosphere, just give it a little bit more diemension. Overall wonderfully done. Destiny | Title: A.R.G.
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 00:34
Comment/Review:
Very cute line art. I agree with bratkitty on this, the fingers do seem to be very pointy on the gal. Both characters look good. Are you plaining to color it? Show us the result if you do.~Fanilia | Title: ARG! Matey!
Reviewed By: bratkitty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 23:06
Comment/Review:
Great for lineart. I highly recommend coloring it. ^_^ Proportions look good. Her hands are a little funky. The one holding the snowboard is a little narrow, and the fingers are really pointy on the snowman. It really needs a background. That would really make this piece stand out. maybe even a simple little horizon with some trees or maybe a mountain or two. I see artists do this a lot, they leave their subject suspended in space with no horizon or anything. I've made this mistake before too. If anything, at least a cast shadow to give her the illusion of weight. Otherwise great job! |
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