| "After The War..." Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: A.R.G. Me!
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 17:29
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Nice drawing I do agree on the eye, but its been mentioned already. Looks like you did a good deal of work getting the textured feel of her clothing. The only thing that seems off to me is the line on the left side of the piece. I'd think it was the begining of a wall, but there is two moons there so it couldn't be.~Fanilia
[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: Bizmarck [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 01:13
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Sweet picture, anatomy and surroundings are lovely, I agree with the others though that the face needs a little work. Draw her face as a sphere with one horizontal and vertical circle denoting her angle of view then all you have to do is make the eyes symmetrical around the center line. It also helps keeping reference on other facial positions so you can repeat the same character from any angle. Symmetry is key its all math's in the end. Other then that I wish I could do anatomy and clothing so easily, damn it!! :) seriously though, very good. :) ;)
[ Request Review Removal ] | Title: Avast! ARG!
Reviewed By: Neko Oni [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 16:39
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Huh, I wouldn't want to run into that girl on a dark night, she's definitely lethal looking. The shading is pretty well done; I think in some areas you could darken and lighten it more, though. Like the stairs need more detail and she needs more of a background, or more shading for it at least. The others are right: The belly button needs to be brought down and her right eye needs to be moved over to the left a little more. I also think that her right thigh needs to be thicken, it's too skinny compared to the rest of the leg. It's good. Keep it up! ;D
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Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 16:15
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I agree with Teeny on the eye and the belly button. The stairs and the props around her are beautifully done, but the moons (I'm guessing it is) should have a bit more of deatils because it looks like clouds. I really love how you shaded the picture, and fantastically done well.
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Reviewed By: Teeny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 11:03
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Your anatomy are impressive. Her left eye should be brought in more though and her bellybutton should be much lower but other than that, she's fine. You shaded her in well but for the rest of the picture, it doesn't have much detail. I suggest you use darker pencils [I find that a 4B/5B pencil does the job for shadows] to bring out more shadows and detail.
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