| "Nicholas in Training" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: AmbientBlue [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 10:11
Comment/Review:
Compaired to the Kaden in Green pic, it looks rushed. But if you totally disregard the Kaden pic, then this is not bad at all. Shading throughout is pretty much correct. The only thing I would work on is the pants...the folds and ripples don't convey his leg form. Your knowledge of muscle tone is darned good, I must say! He looks like Jason! XD
| Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 19:21
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ah, I love the colored version of this piece. Besides what other said, I think that the belt looks a bit too well, roundish. You could tone down a bit on the shading for his belt. But other than that, awesome job. ^.^
| Title: A.R.G. Me
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2003 23:48
Comment/Review:
I like the character It actually reminds me of a wolf I met at a con. The post is good but his head looks a little stiff. My only suggestion is the shading of his muscles, the darkest shading seems to have a definate line to it. I think too the total white of the hilight would have been smoother if it had been a very light shade of the flesh tone. Overall though he looks dark and dangerous. Fanilia
| Title: ARG! Matey!
Reviewed By: bratkitty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2003 22:59
Comment/Review:
Wow! He's so shiney! XOx. You do a very good job shading in the muscles and making them believeable. The hair is really impressive. All the proportions look good. Everything from the waist up is perfect. My main criticism is with the pants. The folds are too random and aren't very believeable, plus I think you have too much hilighted. I'd tone down the white hilight (unless you want his pants to be shiney) and add some darker shadows. You really only need a couple of well defined clothed to make the pants convincing. Otherwise, job well done!
| Title: A.R.G. Review
Reviewed By: Lady Macbeth [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2003 11:44
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Drawing Skill: 10 of 10
Use of Medium: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
The realism style is really working out with your art, Kaden. :) I like the boldness in the shading on this one and the detail in the hair shading. For some reason the line art on the left arm (the one with the fingers pointing upward) jumps out at me, but I can't pinpoint exactly why; technically it's done right, in tones of the colors used below it. :S It may be due to the extreme highlighting on that arm. I like the pose and movement in this one. It works great as a standalone, though I'd love to see it with a background. :D
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