| "Energy Palm" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Title: ARG
Reviewed By: AmbientBlue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 10:57
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awesome oekaki, you handle it well. I love the enegry beam, looks great! If you incorporated more wrinkles in the clothes you would definately have some masterpieces. I also agree with bratkitty on the fingers. Nice dynamic pose, too!
| Reviewed By: ARG [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 22:36
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
You've got a lot of great emotion in this piece. I really like your shading as well. You've got great oekakis. I think that the piece is looking a little flat because her dress does not really rinkle. It would make your foreshortening more dynamic. Good job on that foreshortening, btw.
| Title: A.R.G. Review
Reviewed By: Lady Macbeth [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 20:42
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Drawing Skill: 8 of 10
Use of Medium: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
The pose in this one is definitely energetic, and works well with the energy burst! The energy burst itself works well for oekaki-style, except for the smaller "mini-bursts" seen in the rays - those rather disrupt the flow of the picture. Also, her face and mouth stuck out as a bit too round - try adding a bit more shape to both to get better feature definition.
| Reviewed By: Miss Elaineous83 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 20:22
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Drawing Skill: 7 of 10
Use of Medium: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
The use of shading, light source, and colors is fantastic, but you could really use some training in the human figure. Get an "anatomy for the artist" book or check out some online tutorials, like PolyKarbon. Another thing to consider is proportion. If you look at her right upper arm (which is hidden behind her head) it is disproportionately long. You may also want to give the face some definition rather than just an oval shape. Also think about putting wrinkles in the clothes and a hint of texture to the hair, just so it doesn't look like cloth. I also think the right forearm is at the wrong angle. You have it about 90º. Where her wrist might be able to bend that way, the arm itself can't be that far back and still bend like that. Try putting yourself in that position and you'll see what I mean. The background is also really awesome and the movement of the body shows creativity. I also like how you did the foreshortening in the front with her hand.
| Title: ARG Ye Savvy!!!
Reviewed By: P_Matrix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 20:36
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Drawing Skill: 7 of 10
Use of Medium: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice picture, but if you are going to show some flesh you need to concentrate on the muscle, tones and facial features. Not saying you have to go out and make it perfect but just a few changes here and there and it would be a much better picture. Some the examples that bratkitty made are a good starting point.
| Title: ARG!
Reviewed By: Teeny [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 10:38
Comment/Review:
Who is she? An original character or not? She looks rather cute. o_o Good job with the perspective, that looks like a really difficult position to draw, especially on an oekaki board. Again, the outline is very neat and the colouring looks fine. Also, neat light effects. I'm starting to think that's you trademark. ;) Her shoulders looks a little weird though, especially the one that's away from you. Maybe they need to come out more because in this picture, they go inwards. Also, her eyes are slightly unbalanced. Maybe you can do her right eye a little bigger and place it a few mm to the right. You've got good oekaki skills. :)
| Title: A.R.G. Me.
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 23:59
Comment/Review:
Nice work. I like this the face conveys how much she must be concetrating. The line art is a little choppy, but I see that a lot in Oekaki. The back ground is really intense. I do like how you make the figure come at me. I agree with Bratkitty about the chin and fingers. But also about the excellent quality of the shading and use of light sourse. Great work. Fanilia
| Title: ARG! Matey!
Reviewed By: bratkitty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 14:30
Rating(s):Use of Medium: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow, your shading skills on oekaki are amazing. Your use of light sources are really good. My main crit is in the face. It's really round. I'd angle it in a little around the chin, having it come to a slight point. Also, roud the fingertips off a ittle bit. They're pointy. Otherwise....your use of color, and the background are very nicely well done. Excellent job for an oekaki pic.
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