| "I'll Met By Starlight" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: A.R.G.
Reviewed By: Kaden Fukuyama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 11:27
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I love the concept you have going but the piece itself seems a little too busy. The writting looks a bit to harsh and takes away from the rest of the piece and the eyes on the faces do seem a bit too far apart. The borders you have around some of the characters look really nice. I love the insane look on the face of the guy in the middle. Excellant job on that. And the shading is very well done. Kaden of the A.R.G.
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Reviewed By: Neko Oni [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 00:09
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That's a wicked looking Ranma... I mean, honestly --he's creepy. Right off the bat I could tell that it was for a dark fic or something, with Shampoo's eye patch and Ranma's sinister smile and all that. So you got that down pat. The shading is better in this one, there's more contrast and such. I'd take the advice on the eyes, they need to be closer together. And Ranma also doesn't look good in the center. I put him more to the right, and Akane to the left and drawn bigger. The text also needs to be bigger and possibly overlapping characters to give it an effect like the cast and words are all one big piece... get what I'm talking about, lol? Anyway, it's good. Was always a fan of Ranma! Like to see another! :D
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Reviewed By: bratkitty (not signed in) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 00:44
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Well the shading and lineart are nicely done, but I mainly want to focus on the layout on this one...You've got everything kind of jumbled in the middle with a lot of empty space on the top and bottom. Another thing is that each character is roughly about the same size which can make a pic a little blah. One rule about compositions and layouts that I learned in art class: NEVER center your objects. Maybe if you offset Ranma in the middle and spaced out the other characters a little more, it would look a lot better. Also I suggest staggering the sizes of each of the characters a bit, like make Ranma big (since he seems to be the main focus here) and make the others smaller or something like that. Also the text is extremely hard to read. I'd stick to a more common type of lettering. It seems boring, but is a lot more effective. These are really common mistakes though that I see a lot of artists make. But as I said, the characters are well drawn. Just the layout needs some work. Good job!
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Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 21:58
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nice art. The shading is good, but I agree with Rini on the central characters eyes. The composition seems slightly off with more characters on the left than the right. I would suggest to move the formost character on the bottom to the right of the one on top of her. That will make the viewers eye travel around the image better and make it more balanced.~Fanilia
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Reviewed By: Miss Elaineous83 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 12:26
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I like the layout and design of this pic. The lineart looks pretty good too. Shading is as nice as it is on your other pics, but I like this one becuase it has more contrast. My strongest recommendation on this pic is that you work on characters more. When I first saw this pic I had a lot of trouble telling who was who, because they are all drawn very similarly. When drawing multiple similar-looking people in a fanart, it's probably best to incorporate some kinds of features that tell them apart, and emphasize that a bit. (Yes, the eyes are too far apart on Ranma.) Other than that, I recommend a change of font. Did you notice at the top is says "I'll met my starlight" instead of "meet". I like the way "I'll" is written, but the other letters are disorginized and not quite as attractive as that word. I like the boxes you've encorporated around those three people's heads. It gives the picture a good design. Overall, this is a very good-looking pic.
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Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 14:30
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Nice composing on the characters, and the letterings, well, it was hard to read because of the font. I would suggest to make the letterings thicker or use a different kind of gothic-y font that is more easily to read. Also, Ranma, in the middle who is looking evil. I would say that his eyes are way far apart, so bring in closer in the eyes. Other than that, I love how you drew the characters. It's so nicely done. :D
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