 | Title: Where Am I Now? [ Anime/Manga :: Ranma 1/2 ] By: empty 
Uploaded On: Aug 15 5:33:56 2004
Charcters: Fan Created Characters
Description: This is Ryoshi Hibiki, my alter-ego in the Ranmaversum... he's Ryogas cousin and has a bad sence of direction like the whole Hibiki clan ^^ all in all i'm not quite satisfied with this pic, i could have done the Background a little better...
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| "Where Am I Now?" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: Avast! ARG!
Reviewed By: Neko Oni [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 16:07
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Empty, empty, empty, how do I love it when you submit to us. And you did a Ryoga pic --well, cousing anyway! Just as good. XD Really dear, the background is good. Maybe just add some shading to the stairs if you really want some imporvement in it. His arm is a bit odd looking --too skinny. But everything else is grand! XD
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Reviewed By: Amostar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 14:50
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Wow, I love that background! I do however agree with everyone else, the colors in the background seem a bit less radiant than the character's colors, and the arms do seem a bit thin. Other than that, lovely work! The perspective is fantastic, and the picture really opens up imagination. It tells a story, which means the picture itself has excellent content. Great use of space. :) ~~Amostar~~
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Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 21:16
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I think its cute. The arms do need work but they don't stand out overly. The main suggestion I would give is that with the older style stone, I think the steps and railing would look better as wood instead of stone. The lines are to sharp for stone, but the color says it isn't wood. On the up side the position of the legs and feet are great and for me at least hard to do. He looks like he is going down the stairs and not like he is pasted on them. Good work.~Fanilia
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Reviewed By: Lady Macbeth [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 22:39
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Drawing Skill: 7 of 10
Use of Medium: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Bizmarck mentioned the smallish arm already. I think the only other thing that jumps out at me as "awkward" is the very sharp, clean, steps and railing the don't really mesh well with the rest of the stonework around it - it's almost as though they're temporary things that someone stuck on there. The color in the background also seems to be a bit washed out compared to the color in your character - which is fabulous, I might add. He's really bold and shining with life - I like to see that in artwork. Keep heading in this direction with your art, because it's the right one!
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Reviewed By: Bizmarck [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 22:33
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Sweet, the content is totally there, it has a great feel to it this picture, tells a story… his right arm is a bit on the thin and small side, other then that the proportions, colouring etc are fantastic, the backgrounds well done. But the back wall should have a different shade to the ground stones like the front wall, at least a bit, this would help emphasise the correct form of the background, also the shadows could have a little more contrast, this would give the picture a bit more life, but seriously, other then that arm I have no real issues at all with this pic, and even so, I think its great work :) keep it up.
[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: A.R.G. On: August 16, 2004 08:41
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Cute! I like this pic, Is there a fanfic to go with it? I might have to check it out if there is. Its well drawn and the colors blend. Unlike some of my brothers pictures where he just splashes off colors everywhere. Off track aren't I..sorry. Its a cool idea for an alter ego, I bet you have fun with it ne? Heh. I give this pic a 9. ~.^ Later, the phox
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