| "Sirius" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Nirvana Renegade Seiga [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 23:49
Comment/Review:
Hmm... he's looks like Togusa from Ghost in The Shell... It's the hair...
| Title: A.R.G.
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 14:24
Comment/Review:
I love line art. I agree with the other reviews on the eyes the left is wrong for the angle of the head. the right one is a little too close to the nose. I have trouble with eyes myself and know sometimes you just cant get them right. The detail in the clothing folds is very good. The suit may be out of place, but then he looks young and very well could be a student of magic in this image. Good work.~Fanilia
| Title: ARG!!
Reviewed By: Amostar (not logged in) On: January 11, 2005 14:30
Comment/Review:
Well, I must agree, the suit doesn't quite work for Sirius, and his eyes do seem misplaced. I just tried to put my foot like his left foot is, and it hurt, so I'm betting the posters before me are right about the feet problems as well. LOL Great line art though, very smooth as mentioned before. Good job, overall. :3 ~~Amostar~~
| Title: ARG
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 17:33
Comment/Review:
Nice clean lines. Sauve pose. Realistic folds in the cloth. While there are only minor mistakes, I think you should put some more work into this picture. As it is, it isn't very eye-catching or emotionally moving. What LadyM said about the eyes, I agree with, and I also think the neck could be positioned farther back a little.
| Title: ARG-GY Matey
Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 16:18
Comment/Review:
Nice, I like the smooth lines, something I cannot achieve. Though, you would need to work on aligments, such as his left foot raising up as his leg is raised up. Too odd and a bit uncomfortable. As for his right hand, is placed a bit too high and his right food is showing a bit too much of the foot underside as well. Other than that, I think the suit looks nice on him. Then again, I don't know who the character is, so you may want to listen to Mac about the suit suggestion. Nice work and I would like to see this colored sometime.
| Title: ARG Review
Reviewed By: Lady Macbeth [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2005 16:36
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Drawing Skill: 7 of 10
Use of Medium: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Interesting pic! I'd ditch the suit, though - it doesn't suit him, pun intended. ^_^; His eyes are a bit wonky - out of alignment, I think. Nice pose for a character drawing. Since it's black and white line art, I'd also fill his hair in black - white hair in black and white line art is usually for light-haired characters. Keep up the good work! :)
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