| "And We All Fall Down" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: ARG
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 21:58
Comment/Review:
The background is glaringly white against these two beautiful maidens. Another suggestion is that you could tweak the body proportions a little more accurately, such as the fingers for the brunette or the too-steep slope of her thighs. Maybe you could've added more color to their eyes and expressions as well; otherwise, the poses are ambitious and you did well with the sheets.
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Title: AVAST! ARG!
Reviewed By: Neko Oni [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 23:12
Comment/Review:
Another nice pic from you. For the medium and scan quality, the art looks good. I think maybe the shading needs to be a little more delicate as I can see the individual strokes. The folds on the sheets are very nice. I would maybe cut off some of the top of the picture to get rid of that empty negative space. Great line art and pic. ^_^
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Title: ARG :)
Reviewed By: Bizmarck [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 19:49
Comment/Review:
The rough (charcoal) style of the line-art, the pale composition, but with clear defined texture and shading on the clothing and bed surface, and subtle accurate shading of the skin, the fantastic highlights in the hair, a rather provocative but still semi innocent pose… Damn fine work, I quite simply love the style… a damn fine picture… good work. Biz :)
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Title: YAY!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: ginaaaa On: February 09, 2005 15:08
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Drawing Skill: 10 of 10
Use of Medium: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I MEMBER THIS PIC!!!!! You showed me that one day when I didn't know about Love Hina and all of its real ish (i just thought it wuz hentai-go figure) but anywayz, AND I LOVE THIS PIC!!! hehehe ^_^
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Title: hehe
Reviewed By: tara On: February 08, 2005 18:26
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Drawing Skill: 10 of 10
Use of Medium: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hah im sure this is one of kts favorite pictures ;) i like it..its really pretty..awesome shading and everything =)
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