| "Rinoa Heartilly" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: ARG ;)
Reviewed By: Bizmarck [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 00:39
Comment/Review:
It works for me, I'm a sucker for good pencil work, and she's very pretty… only comment is that the nose and mouth are a little right of the centerline of the face, (from the center point of the two eyes to the tip of the chin. Other then that, very smooth, great shading… Biz ;)
| Title: Avast! FARG!
Reviewed By: Neko Oni [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 02:00
Comment/Review:
Cleaning up a pic on the comp is not a bad thing! Lol. Sometimes your scanner does horrible things to the pic, and the good ol' eraser doesn't clean up the pic as nice. But anyway, very nice! The sketch is great... I would just try to clean up the lines a little with starting out light on the strokes first and then darkening them up when you get the right shape. And also some shading on the skin would balance the pic out. Wonderful sketch, so glad you decided to submit!
| Title: F.A.R.G.
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 17:23
Comment/Review:
Nice pencil sketch. I like the heart shape to her head. The hair is shaded well. I think the head is a little large when I compaire it to the shoulders, but it could be the hair style that makes it appear so. I would suggest adding a little more shading to the face to keep it uniform with the neck and arms. overall nice work.~Fanilia
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