| "Dawn Team Chaos" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: FARG
Reviewed By: Bizmarck [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 13:56
Comment/Review:
Sweet, I love the pose, very sexy, and the expression is so innocent, though you can tell she is not… he he… The legs and hands appear a little thin compared to the rest of the body, only way to keep that in check is to check back when doing the preliminary checks, you'll have to gauge the size difference off of examples, mirror photos, its just a matter of practice, though worth spending some time on…. Love the image… :)
| Title: FARG
Reviewed By: dxgirly2 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 21:12
Comment/Review:
I love the style in this one. Her facial expression is so cute! I love how her hair came out, and her outfit, so cool!! The fishnets are defitenitely rocking as well. You've got all the details working for you, plus your proportions are dead on. Great work! Thanks for submitting! ~Dx
| Title: FARG
Reviewed By: White_Winged_Atlantian [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 00:30
Comment/Review:
This is a lovely pose, and what you've got going with the face only compliments it. Hands are hard to do and you've got them very well down. Feet inside a shoe are harder still and though you do them fairly ok, more shape to the shoe would be a good thing to add. And while you have a shadow behind her, there is nothing behind her legs, that is something to think of as well as where the light comes from. The colouring job is ok but could be more dramatic. Try colouring harder. Good work and keep it up dear,
l//EN | Title: F.A.R.G.
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 12:22
Comment/Review:
The art is good. The head, angle of the shoulders and the hands look good. I would like to see the colors stand out more and the grey pencil less in the fore front. The one thing that I see that looks a little off to me is where her theighs meet, there would be some flatening but not a wide space in the crouch area at that angle. Those eyes have real spark to them, I'd love to see them in color.~Fanilia
| Title: F.A.R.G!
Reviewed By: songiesworld [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 14:32
Comment/Review:
This picture is pretty good. You should look into some tutorial for coloring so you couild blend your colors in better then the way they appear now. If you used colored pencils you should use a blender pencil to make the colors more even so that you don't see those white spaces in between the coloring. The angle of the one foot on the left is a little off but other then that this picture is good. Hope to see more of you works again. I love that vegeta one in you gallery. ^_~ Songie
| Title: kewl
Reviewed By: baka hanyou rahvin On: September 23, 2005 16:02
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Drawing Skill: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like her best out of all your team chaos drawings.
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