| "Paging Doctor Paiway" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: FARG
Reviewed By: dxgirly2 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 20:29
Comment/Review:
Nice work on the cell shading coloring approach!! You definitely nailed it! I especially like how the highlights on the bangs came out. Very nice indeed. As far as proportions go, her hands are just a little bit small in comparison to the rest of her body, and her shoulders a little too broad. You did, however, do a very good job of finding your light source and correctly shading. Great work!! Thanks for submitting!! ~Dx
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Title: Sort of FARG
Reviewed By: Biz (sorry fan!) On: October 17, 2005 14:42
Comment/Review:
I think… here for once, is an image with too much symmetry! ;-) Never thought I would say that but this is very straining on the eyes somehow, not sure why. Form and line art skill point of view it's a very good work, it must be said, my only anatomy tips would be the size of her hands and the slightly cross eyed nature of the eyes, though this may be due to the stiffness of the pose and the high colour contrast seemingly pulling the image a bit to the centre… but it could all be taste thing… crisp finish though… a good example of good line art skill. ;-)
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Title: F.A.R.G!
Reviewed By: songiesworld [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 10:16
Comment/Review:
I really like this picture. It almost has bilateral symmetry throughout the picture. The only thing that bugged me was the size of her hands. Every viewer has a different opinion on what seems to affect them the most. Since the darkest parts of the picture are what attracts my eye the black on the blue pulled my eyes to how small the hands really are. Even though she is a skinny charater in general that just needs to be worked out. Everything else the other reviewers pointed out. But like I said before the picture appeals to me also and I really like the cartoon like coloring you did. Congradulations on putting out a excellent coloring piece and I do hope to see more of your work soon. ^_~ Songie
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Title: FARG
Reviewed By: Sonicwind123 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 19:44
Comment/Review:
The use of color is really good, and overall it is not to bad, the one thing I don't like is that you do not use shadowing at all in the picture. Overall though it does have promise
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Title: F.A.R.G.
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 00:17
Comment/Review:
You did a very nice coloring job. Your use of color is great and makes for a nice to look at image. I might suggest that the light banding on the hair not be at the same position on the bangs and the hair. Also since the hair is pulled up it wouldn't be rounded and the banding would be more flat. You have a great start at coloring, I expect we will be seeing more of your work.~Fanilia
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