| "Silence" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: FARG
Reviewed By: dxgirly2 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 20:23
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I admire your approach to the positioning in this piece. The dragon's body is curved very nicely around the girl, and it makes the picture more interesting. One thing you should try to work on is a consistency of line pressure and thickness. See how the body and head's outline is so much darker than the tail's? That looks somewhat awkward. The girl herself is pretty well drawn, though she seems a bit stiff-necked. Also, work on her expression a bit; it could bring a whole new life to the picture! Thanks for submitting!! ~Dx
| Title: farg
Reviewed By: Sonicwind123 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 19:46
Comment/Review:
It is really good, I like how everything looks, and I think the dragon was done well, especial the work on the wings. the one thing I would change would be that I would do the detail a bit darker.
| Title: F.A.R.G.
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 00:26
Comment/Review:
I couldn't agree more on the dragon, fantastic work on it. Everything about it was dead on, even beautiful (I love dragons). The girl is nice, but does need some work. The cape had to be hard, but the lines of the girl's middle body seem very thin. Her face when compaired to the dragon doesn't look as if it has a true expression. I don't see any reason why you can't bring your humans up to the level of the dragon with practice.~Fanilia
| Title: FARG
Reviewed By: Bizmarck [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 05:02
Comment/Review:
The dragon simply rocks! Great work, the girl in comparison appears to be anatomically a little wayward, best to use examples, and when setting out, to ensure proportions and scaling of the torso, head and limbs is smooth and natural, a great tip is to use a mirror to set up the line skeleton and rough outline of your character. Her individual details and line work is actually very good, it's just some of her composition which appears do drift ever so slightly, and is usually caused by not enough anatomy set out to begin with… Can't wait to see the next one ^^
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