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Title: Jayba Team Chaos [ Anime/Manga :: Yu Yu Hakusho ] By: Leviatha
Uploaded On: Oct 26 12:29:15 2005
Charcters: Original Character
Description: Here's my latest drawing of Jayba,from Team Chaos. I think I did pretty good on her! ^_^
Image Properties: 528x760 53.24 kb
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"Jayba Team Chaos" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ]
Reviewed By: CHICHA  On: March 23, 2008 22:36
Comment/Review:
o.O she is flatter than a 10 year old boy...ah, well. good job any way.
Title: F.A.R.G! 
Reviewed By: songiesworld [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 05, 2005 10:10
Comment/Review:
The character design is awesome. Like Dx said in the review before this the shades are a little to bland for a viewers taste. You'll probably just have to sit down for a longer stretch of time and evenly color the character with more vibrant colors but other then that this picture is awesome. Awesome work. ^_~ Songie
Title: FARG 
Reviewed By: dxgirly2 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 29, 2005 20:59
Comment/Review:
The colors seem a bit dull, though perhaps thats just due to the scan. I like the overall pose, it brings the viewers eye in and keeps it there. The small details work very well. Great work!! ~Dx
Title: FARG review 
Reviewed By: White_Winged_Atlantian [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 28, 2005 23:41
Comment/Review:
Despite being off 'balance' slightly, the picture itself is almost within very well balanced. All you really would need in there would be something in the lower right corner. More definition and more clear shading would also put touches of utter refinement to your picture. It's very nice, keep on drawing.
Title: F.A.R.G. 
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 08, 2005 14:45
Comment/Review:
The coloring is nicely done. I am unsure if the blue under her red hair is another layer of hair or if she has wings and they are in that position. The character is drawn nicely. I to feel she is slightly off balance and the addition of mostion lines would help this. I really like the style of her eye and the detail in the breast plate. I would like to see the green of her panties continued into part of her breastplate so she has more of an outfit on. Hope to see more of your work soon.~Fanilia
Title: FARG 
Reviewed By: Bizmarck [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 06, 2005 05:30
Comment/Review:
Not bad, the pose is a little off putting because her centre of balance is off, and the rest of her stance doesn't really show enough movement to balance the picture, so to speak, her armour and the general work is fine, nice image all around, just watch that centre of balance thing, motion is a key element.

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