| "Daa x3 version 1" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: FARG
Reviewed By: Bizmarck [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 14:21
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Looks like your heading in the right direction, it still looks a little stiff, but that will go away with more practice and working on the fluidity of the limbs/clothes etc, also make sure you check our key symmetry points, ears eyes chin etc,
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Title: F.A.R.G.
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 16:03
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Its a nice work. There are a lot of different characters and poses to look at, this makes the image fun to see and easy for the viewers eye to travel around the piece. I think the next step for you would be cleaning up the background to make it as white as possible. I would love to see it colored also.(I added the character names to the system so you can add them if you like)~Fanilia [ Delete Review]
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Title: F.A.R.G. Review
Reviewed By: Lady Macbeth [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 17:23
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Drawing Skill: 9 of 10
Use of Medium: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a very active, dynamic piece. The actual dimensions of this piece are a bit small for the amount of detail you've included, and it would help to have the line art darker and the background whiter - that can be achieved through adjusting the levels when you scan it, or through making adjustments in an image editing program. The cute, deformed style of drawing adds to the fun of this image; the only thing that seems a bit awkward is the size and positioning of the baby in front. I would also love to see this one cleaned up and in color - I think it'd add a whole new level of dynamics to the image.
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Title: lovely
Reviewed By: radhika_best [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 02:05
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Drawing Skill: 10 of 10
Use of Medium: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
it's very sweet . hope you keep on adding more fanarts
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Title: FARG
Reviewed By: White_Winged_Atlantian [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 19:41
Comment/Review:
Excellent work going here dear, your picture has all sorts of things going on, but not too much so that it's not overcrowded. What Dx said about colour would be a good idea, but you have all sorts of overlapping figures. If you only coloured the largest foremost figures fully it would make them stand out, while if you really wished with the other characters a washy-one colour over each would work well. Keep it up!
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Title: F.A.R.G!
Reviewed By: songiesworld [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 15:40
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Wow alot of detail going on here. The layout design is awesome. One thing that would have really helped you in your picture is line weight. You lines don't really fluxuate at all so it gives the picture a lacking feeling. Overall it's great and the expressions are classic. I wish I knew more about the series and the characters but I really get a feeling about them through your picture. Awesome portrayal. ^_~ Songie
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Title: FARG
Reviewed By: dxgirly2 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 13:57
Comment/Review:
Lots of stuff going on here. I like that. Your picture certainly has a lot of expression. THats great! Everyone has a definite attitude and clear disposition. Fabulous work on that. Your proportions are meant to be comical so not much to comment on there, though since the front-most two figures seem to be in normal size, there hands should be slightly larger than they are right now. Color would definitely give a whole new dimension to this picture, and I would definitely recommend at least trying it out. Very nice cute comic style overall. Great work! Thanks for submitting!! ~Dx
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