| "Wishful" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: F.A.R.G.
Reviewed By: Tomb_Robber_Emiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 12:27
Comment/Review:
It is a nice-looking profile view. :) The only critique I can really offer is that her eye should be lower. The curve between the nose and the forehead is basically where the eyesockets are, so, naturally, the eyes belong in them. :P A bit more like this: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v686/joou/ahgkjb.jpg ... (hurrah for quick MSPaint edits). And yes, some more "whisps" of hair sticking out would make it look less stiff, but that's up to you. :3
| Reviewed By: MidknightBlu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 00:53
Comment/Review:
Very nice, I've said it before that your work looks straight out of a manga. I think your proportions are nice, each artist has a different style, I mean look at Escaflowne, they were some bad profiles. Only citique I can think of is perhaps adding more of a fringe that flicks out at the front, because it kind of looks as though her fringe is stuck to her forhead. Other than that well done!
| Title: F.A.R.G.
Reviewed By: sadamex [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 00:10
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Drawing Skill: 7 of 10
Use of Medium: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ojamashimasu! Again, scanning quality. Lady and Fan-sama has already made suggestions, so I won't anymore. ^^ This is a nicely done sideview; I only wish you had drawn her lower on the page so that the top didn't cut her brow too short--it made her face look unproportional. The nose was too big, and the eyes should be positioned in the joint between the brow and the nose bridge. Her expression is very lovely, and I love her hair! ^^ Keep practicing; this is good and I know you'll get better! Lots of love and chocolate! ~Sada-chan
| Title: F.A.R.G. Review
Reviewed By: Lady Macbeth [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 20:48
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Drawing Skill: 9 of 10
Use of Medium: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I agree with Fan on the scan quality - if you have access to an image editing program, try playing with the levels and maybe even an eraser tool to try to lift some of that grey out of there, and crop the black band off the bottom. Other than that, it looks good - it's a nice profile shot, and the eye has fabulous detail. Her forehead looks a little short, but I think that's because of the unusual cropping cutting it off in the middle of the forehead. This one has a lot of potential!
| Title: F.A.R.G.
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 18:43
Comment/Review:
Very nicely done side view. My suggestion conserns the scan. The bottom including the black from the scanner bed and the grey area where you didnt have ot down all the way take away from the nice art you drew. Otherwise, good work.~Fanilia
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