| "Bound By Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: F.A.R.G.
Reviewed By: Tomb_Robber_Emiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 12:48
Comment/Review:
After seeing your other stuff, I think you should try doing some full-body stuff, cause all your gallery seems to be "cut-offs". This aside, the picture looks good. :D You have some nice shading, and some good emotions. The arm is definitely too skinny and short for his body type, though. And he lacks nipples. D: Though, for some reason, -most- anime guys lack nipples, which is a little eerie in my opinion. Just sayin'. :B
| Title: FARG
Reviewed By: Bizmarck [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 15:10
Comment/Review:
The bits I can make out look clean and smooth, his arm is a tad on the thin side, and overall general proportioning could be reviewed, (set out lines with dimension checking during start out phase are a good way to train the eye) definitely some high quality imaging, just have to get your scaling a bit more to the norm.. Biz ^^
| Title: FARG Review
Reviewed By: Lady Macbeth [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 19:37
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Drawing Skill: 7 of 10
Use of Medium: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is an interesting take on an emotive nude - the feel you have going in the image is well-conceived and planned out. Having the character split down the center is a unique and interesting perspective, but it would work a little better if the edge was aligned on the center line all the way to the bottom - right now, it looks like he's leaning off the edge, because his lower torso down starts to have more and more over the center line. Also, as tedious as it is, I'd have liked to have seen the thorns continued throughout the vinework - right now, it looks like you did the first couple of rows and got tired of it and gave up. Whether that's true or not, that's how it comes across to the viewer. The shading on this piece is rather light - for something as emotive as this, very bold shading can be an effective tool. You've got a great start here, I'd love to see it fleshed out more.
| Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 23:59
Comment/Review:
This is a nice rug'd piece, and I can feel the pain from him because of the thorns and the blood. The arm is, as sisi said, skewered, but it is understandable as they can be hard to draw. This is probably my preference, but I think the neck is too thick, but it is still a nice piece. Nice job!
| Title: FARG
Reviewed By: White_Winged_Atlantian [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 00:15
Comment/Review:
You've got a good handle on blood, though your proportion on hands and really everything from his elbow down is a little skewered, It's something that comes with time. Too small you see, try using a refrance if you're unsure or drawing out a skeletal sketch before the beginning sketch. Your hair, especially in the ponytail is done very well. Good work. ~Sisseh
| Title: F.A.R.G.
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 19:08
Comment/Review:
it looks nice. The body shape is pretty good and the shading is right on. The only things I notice are the elbow seems just a little bit high and the hand is definately too small. The cuts look painful. Good work.~Fanilia
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