| "Heero and Duo in Bed." Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: NorseQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 13:36
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Drawing Skill: 7 of 10
Use of Medium: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a very good drawing, though the ring on Duo's finger is a little to bright considering it is in the shadow part of the bed. The bars on the bed seem to be drawn into the wall rather then actrually being apart of the bed. Their hair is amazing! The border overlapping the picture takes away from the emotion in it though. Duo's hand under the blanket seems off, as well as his arm under Heero, who's shoulder seems too sharp. The sheet around them is perfect!
| Title: FARG
Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 11:00
Comment/Review:
This is a very nice composition piece. I like the shading skills and the antonomy of their bodies, though I agree with fan on the placement of his arm under the other male. It does look uncomfortable. I feel that some parts of the image is too sharp and other areas are too soft. The blankets, I understand, but not their skins because there is an inconsistency of soft and sharp areas. The pillow is also inconsistent because the bed and the blankets are very soft on the edgest but the pillow isn't. I also notice that the outline of the pillow and some parts of thes skin where it is too sharp, you can see a light, like yellow to off white is around those objects. Which makes for an even sharper image. Maybe you can focus on a consistent style, such as soft background (like the blanket) and sharp foreground (the subjects, in this case, the characters). Otherwise, it's a very nice piece.
| Title: F.A.R.G.
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 00:29
Comment/Review:
I am going to say right off I dont like the texture overlay that looks like the old style ceiling tyle. It detracts from the image and isn't needed. Additionaly the pattern overlay in the sheets is wonderful, it really is nicely done and adds a softness to the composition. The palcement of Duo's arm under Heero seems off. It should be a little higher under the neck and not the shoulder. No one would be sleeping that way, its just to uncomfortable. I noticed the arm on top of the sheet is blured on the edges but sharp where it meets the green tank shirt. The hair...Let's just say wow. Overall, I like the quite beauty of this image.~Fanilia
| Title: FARG
Reviewed By: Silver Armada [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 14:37
Comment/Review:
I love the softness of this image. It really gives the enter piece a tender and emotional feel. :3 That said, there are only a few things I notice in this image that seem off. First, the hands seem both a little too small and too flat. The rest of the image has a wonderful sense of form and fullness but the hands seem two-dimensional and flat. Hands are very difficult, so don't be afraid to study hands or use a model or a picture for reference when drawing a picture. Secondly, the lips on both men look odd. You've got the dark shadow where they meet, which is good, but the upper lip and lower lip are generally the same color in your image. The upper lip tends to be cast in shadow more than the lower lip, and especially so in dim lighting like the kind in this image. It's a great fanart, and something I wish I had in my own gallery. Keep up the awesome work and thanks for submitting to FARG! :D
| Reviewed By: LonelyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 19:18
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Drawing Skill: 8 of 10
Use of Medium: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very nice! I like how soft it but the shirt that Heero is in stands out too much, it looks very harsh against the soft skin. But other than that I think that it is very beautiful!
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